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Nice smudging, text killed it.
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I like it a lot 8/10
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VUL7AGE wrote Nice smudging, text killed it.
well i have to put my name some where to show that its mine and no one can take credit
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Its a nice piece, but the smudging looks too basic.
The colors are mashed up all over really.
Next time, when duplicating your render to smudge it, try a different technique of smudging (I use chalk brush and 79% strength, then i make little circle smudges, it gives it a cloudy effect)
Still a nice piece though bro, keep it up and
The colors are mashed up all over really.
Next time, when duplicating your render to smudge it, try a different technique of smudging (I use chalk brush and 79% strength, then i make little circle smudges, it gives it a cloudy effect)
Still a nice piece though bro, keep it up and
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I can't say its any better than your last one. You should really consider watching some tutorials, it'll help you out a lot.
Now let's talk about what is wrong with this signature. Like I said, I normally don't give feedback on beginner signatures, but since we all start somewhere I kinda feel an obligation to guide you through signature making. So please read this comment thoroughly cause there is no point in me giving feedback, if you're not going to take it. Okay let's start with probably the most basic part of smudging; blending the render with the background. It is a MUST to incorporate the render with the background. And I don't necessarily mean smudging the render as well, but you want to make it look like the render belongs in the signature. I recommend you go to Agitator's profile and check out any of his signatures to get an idea of what I am talking about. Now lets talk about the smudging itself. Right now it looks very bland and boring. You might want to sharpen it up a bit to give it a-with lack of a better word- sharper look. You also want to change the size, jitter, and spacing of your brush every once in a while, so the signature looks better. Now let's talk about your text. I'm going to write the following thing in capital letters just so I can stress the importance of it. THERE IS ABSOLUTELY NO NEED TO ADD TEXT TO A SIGNATURE. Since text can either MAKE a signature or BREAK a signature. Therefore, don't just slap it on.
Again, do not take this feedback lightly, you will only get better if you improve..
-MacMiller
Now let's talk about what is wrong with this signature. Like I said, I normally don't give feedback on beginner signatures, but since we all start somewhere I kinda feel an obligation to guide you through signature making. So please read this comment thoroughly cause there is no point in me giving feedback, if you're not going to take it. Okay let's start with probably the most basic part of smudging; blending the render with the background. It is a MUST to incorporate the render with the background. And I don't necessarily mean smudging the render as well, but you want to make it look like the render belongs in the signature. I recommend you go to Agitator's profile and check out any of his signatures to get an idea of what I am talking about. Now lets talk about the smudging itself. Right now it looks very bland and boring. You might want to sharpen it up a bit to give it a-with lack of a better word- sharper look. You also want to change the size, jitter, and spacing of your brush every once in a while, so the signature looks better. Now let's talk about your text. I'm going to write the following thing in capital letters just so I can stress the importance of it. THERE IS ABSOLUTELY NO NEED TO ADD TEXT TO A SIGNATURE. Since text can either MAKE a signature or BREAK a signature. Therefore, don't just slap it on.
Again, do not take this feedback lightly, you will only get better if you improve..
-MacMiller
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the lighting needs some work its not bad but its not good, the border size is always going to be a personal preference but I feel they are to thick, This stly of smudging isnt to difficult, and there isnt really any flow. The text needs a lot of work.
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Well considering I smudge, work on the detail of the smudge first.
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