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Hello guys!
Havnt posted on the tech game in a LONG time, and i also fell behind in my graphics skills (if i had any to begin with). But anyway ive had a go at making my first piece of graphics in at least 6 months.
I know its a bit plain, but im fresh out of ideas lol. (Actually its very plain, lots of blank spaces, guess i got lazy :/)
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Havnt posted on the tech game in a LONG time, and i also fell behind in my graphics skills (if i had any to begin with). But anyway ive had a go at making my first piece of graphics in at least 6 months.
I know its a bit plain, but im fresh out of ideas lol. (Actually its very plain, lots of blank spaces, guess i got lazy :/)
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Looks really cool man
8/10 from me <3
The only thing I could say is add a little bit more stuff ...
Apart from that it is amazing
JimmyNibble
8/10 from me <3
The only thing I could say is add a little bit more stuff ...
Apart from that it is amazing
JimmyNibble
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im liking the concept man.
the scan lines make it look really tidy.
theres plenty of flaws with it.
firstly, the smoke at the bottom looks really unrealistic and not blended in, maybe fix that with some smudge or light eraser.
secondly, im not liking the blurred outline of him, it dusnt look right with the sharp render, maybe remove that and it will look tidier in my opinion
lastly, on his back, its wierd how its all dark apart from a little section, its very distracting and takes your eyes away from the main part of the piece, try making that dark and it wont distract you.
pretty sweet piece pal.
keep it up
the scan lines make it look really tidy.
theres plenty of flaws with it.
firstly, the smoke at the bottom looks really unrealistic and not blended in, maybe fix that with some smudge or light eraser.
secondly, im not liking the blurred outline of him, it dusnt look right with the sharp render, maybe remove that and it will look tidier in my opinion
lastly, on his back, its wierd how its all dark apart from a little section, its very distracting and takes your eyes away from the main part of the piece, try making that dark and it wont distract you.
pretty sweet piece pal.
keep it up
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Subz wroteim liking the concept man.
the scan lines make it look really tidy.
theres plenty of flaws with it.
firstly, the smoke at the bottom looks really unrealistic and not blended in, maybe fix that with some smudge or light eraser.
secondly, im not liking the blurred outline of him, it dusnt look right with the sharp render, maybe remove that and it will look tidier in my opinion
lastly, on his back, its wierd how its all dark apart from a little section, its very distracting and takes your eyes away from the main part of the piece, try making that dark and it wont distract you.
pretty sweet piece pal.
keep it up
Yhh i agree with you on all points you made, especially the dark part with the little light section, it is distracting.
Thanks for the feedback!
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This contains ALL of my work, from when i first started, so if you see some really bad stuff you will know its from a long time ago lol
I prefer doing simple and clean work tbh and is prob why i find it hard to get things to fill in the blank spaces.
Again thanks alot for the feed back!
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