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TTGpandazz
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here is the video also sub if you want to and tell me how i could get better.

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It would have been better if you synced the shot to when the chorus kicked in, that starting beat would have synced to the shot quite well.

The optical flares look sloppy, reducing the overall viewing pleasure.

Also, that lock-on effect is a bit overused, and is boring to see after a while.

5.75/10
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you could sync the actual shot with when the music starts with the big drum or whatever so just slow the shot dopwn or something
just an idea
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RaitoKunRyuk wrote It would have been better if you synced the shot to when the chorus kicked in, that starting beat would have synced to the shot quite well.

The optical flares look sloppy, reducing the overall viewing pleasure.

Also, that lock-on effect is a bit overused, and is boring to see after a while.

5.75/10


instead of the lock on effect he could use like where a white line carves out the persons shape and then flashers or something
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RaitoKunRyuk wrote It would have been better if you synced the shot to when the chorus kicked in, that starting beat would have synced to the shot quite well.

The optical flares look sloppy, reducing the overall viewing pleasure.

Also, that lock-on effect is a bit overused, and is boring to see after a while.

5.75/10

Thanks man for the feedback ill work on it some more cause im not so advanced with vegas or AAE.
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