Hey, these two are great stories, keep it up! Liking how you added people to the story, like that girl. Yay for good stories like you and mrmacgee's!

Announcement: It seems that I have a problem people...
I have run out of room for my second story!!!
I have decided to make a separate topic for my second story.
I will have links connecting them at the bottom of it.
Remember to check out separate topic!


EDIT
I am actually not sure what I will do yet this is a stickied topic.
I think I will pm TTG SEAN about it and ask a few questions.
So for now there is no separate topic.
But as for my update here is Chapter 7 of my second story. Please enjoy!!!

Chapter 7: What are These Things?

The one place in this God forsaken village that we called ‘safe’ appeared to have been pummeled by artillery shells. There were large holes everywhere on the building: the door was ripped from its hinges, the windows were wide open, and there were large holes in the roof. As I approached the building, I could hear gunshots ringing through the building. As Pvt. Moore and I walked through the door, I heard a terrifying sound.

“What the hell was that?!?” I shouted to Pvt. Moore.

“How should I know? Let’s go!” He replied. We continued through the building to the upstairs. Scattered all around were these strange looking corpses. They were about the size of a dog, and had some kind of wings on them. Bullet holes were planted throughout the corpses.

“SOFC Price and Pvt. Moore! Get in the room now while you can!” I heard from Lt. Jackson, who was standing in an open doorway. We ducked inside the small bedroom and Lt. Jackson slammed the door. He locked it quickly, and then fell down of exhaustion.

“Lt. Jackson! What happened here? Where are Sgt. White and Alexandra?” I asked him frantically. He didn’t say anything, but pointed to a corner of the room. There Sgt. White was slouched down in a corner with Alexandra next to him, with what looked like a bite mark in his left shoulder.

“Sgt. White! What happened?” I asked him as I knelt down next to him to examine his wound. It was definitely a bite mark and he was losing blood fast. So as he replied, I wrapped the sheets off the bed around the wound to stop the bleeding.

“I obeyed my orders Sir. Whenever the creatures broke into the room they headed for Alexandra first. I fought them back as hard as I could to protect her, because you told me to not let anything happen to her. She’s fine, but I received a wound to my left shoulder. One of those creatures took a bite out of me.” He replied.

“Alexandra, are you alright?” I quickly asked her, and she solemnly and fearfully nodded yes.

“Sgt. White, I tremendously appreciate your obedience to me and this mission. It is very honorable and means a lot. You even sustained an injury and kept going. But I need you to tell me about those creatures.” I told him.

“There were so many of them it was hard to even tell what they were Sir. They looked like demons the best I can remember. They had wings like a bat, a pale white body, a head with fangs, and claws that could rip through anything. It was horrifying…” He recalled. I had no clue what these things were, but they sounded like trouble.

“Sir! I think we’re about to get a revisit from these new-found freaks again!” Lt. Jackson shouted as we heard and felt what was like a huge rush of wind, leathery wings flapping, and the hissing and howling of the creatures. I kicked over the bed in front of the door to keep it shut for awhile.

“Men! We need to get out of here! If we stay here we may risk the safety of Alexandra and ourselves! Pvt. Moore, you try and open up that small hole so we can get through! We’ll cover the door! Sgt. White, you stay next to Alexandra and keep her safe!” I yelled as I heard something banging against the door. Pvt. Moore also grabbed a MP40 out of his bag and handed it to Lt. Jackson.

We all waited there, chilled by the thought of being killed by strange flying creatures. Pvt. Moore and I didn’t know what to expect, so we stayed on our guard.

About one minute after the sounds stopped, there was a ferocious attack on the door. Screeches and howls filled the air as Lt. Jackson and I attempted to keep the door closed.
Then one of the creatures managed to fly through the hole that Pvt. Moore was digging through.

It landed in the middle of the room, in view of us all. It looked almost exactly as Sgt. White had described them, except worse. There was blood dripping from its gruesome fangs and claws, it appeared to be some creature from Hell itself, and it wasn’t going to be friendly. It let out a blood-curdling screech, and flung itself towards me. I managed to hit it with my STG-44 right before it hit me, and it fell to the ground. I stepped over its throat and it began to struggle to get free. I took aim at its head and took one shot. It stopped struggling and died, but I knew there would be many more.

“Sir! I have the hole open! Let’s go!” Pvt. Moore shouted as he slid through.

“Alexandra! Go with them! I’ll meet you all outside!” I shouted. She and Lt. Jackson went through the hole, and then the door burst open. The creatures filled the room like water filling a cup, finding every place to get in. They swarmed all over me as I attempted to fight them off with my STG-44.

“Go on without me Sir! You must escape!” Sgt. White exclaimed at the sight of me being viscously maimed by the creatures.

“I…never…leave…a man…BEHIND!!!” I screamed as I finally got the ‘Night Demons’ as I named them, off of me. I put my STG-44 on my back and grabbed my FG42 and ripped through the Night Demons like there was no end. Anything that tried to fly and attack me was immediately pulverized by bullets.

As most of the Night Demons lay there wounded or dead, I grabbed Sgt. White and put him over my shoulder to carry him. I slid down through the hole to the outside with my men.

“Men! We need to move now! Alexandra I want you to stick with me! Soldiers, this village is looking more gruesome as we speak. We don’t have much time left, so we need to leave as soon as possible.” I told them.

“SOFC Price, I saw a parked truck earlier when we landed in the village. Should we make our way towards it?” Pvt. Moore asked.

“That’s a good plan Pvt. Moore. But there’s no doubt we will have to fight our way. You take point then. Sgt. White, if you can walk I need you to stay with Alexandra and keep her safe again. Alright men; let’s move!” I shouted.

“Austin? Are we going to leave soon? Because I’m scared…” Alexandra asked.

“Alexandra, we are going to leave now. We just have to get to this truck, and then we can get away from this scary place, OK?” I asked her as I knelt down. I had to keep my speech so that she could understand. She nodded solemnly, and I picked her up so she wouldn’t have to walk through the blood-drenched streets. It reminded me much of carrying my own son, and I began to daydream. But it wasn’t long until I was sucked back into reality.

Chapter 8: Change of Plans

I will pm SEAN as soon as I can about my second topic.
Enjoy! Remember to post you thoughts/ideas/suggestions!!!

I have a suggestion. Make the 2nd story on another post not thread right below the first one so it would be double posting but for a good reason. You could make a post have Sean or anybody really move it to the second spot and you would be good to go

Mr_Greenbird wrote I have a suggestion. Make the 2nd story on another post not thread right below the first one so it would be double posting but for a good reason. You could make a post have Sean or anybody really move it to the second spot and you would be good to go

Hey that's a really good idea Greenbird thanks for the suggestion! I'll pm SEAN about it! Hopefully it will work...

nice dude this is fcking sick keep it up

TTG_ROBERT wrote nice dude this is fcking sick keep it up

Thanks I won't be updating though until I can get the space sorted out because I ran out of space on my post But I will keep them coming thanks!

ok sounds good to me

Good stuff Roscoz - Keep it coming !

Snowhiter wrote Good stuff Roscoz - Keep it coming !

Thanks Snowhiter I will.
I will be working on my next chapters but as i've said before I won't update until I can sort out the amount of space problem.
Thanks for reading! Thanks for your all's patience while I sort this out!

This story is excellent, I'm not much of a 'story reader' but this was really good