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#11. Posted:
VinylJunkie
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"I hopped into a hospital where they were doin a blood test
Hopped in the back and gave myself a drug test,"

Don't rhyme Test with Test....
Big name rappers like Lil' Wayne try to do that (i.e.: Rhyme ***** with *****) & look how we all feel about him...
#12. Posted:
Mofis
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Kind of good but honestly not the best I've seen better from people like you.
#13. Posted:
Govern
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Not bad. I'd suggest to start using bigger words so that it catches people's attention.
#14. Posted:
Lil_Jay
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Do you keep it real or rap about anything?
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