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Opinions on this, a verse from my ep, It;s still a draft so needs to be cleaned up.
I think there's something wrong with me
from injectin these diseased needles, I don't
read labels, I go over the corresponding amount
till i start to cough and blood comes out of my mouth.
I hopped into a hospital where they were doin a blood test
Hopped in the back and gave myself a drug test,
I tested positiv for hepatitis B, no wonder
I rap so blindly I cant even see,
Sometimes I don't even understand half the words I say
Metaphors and similes dont seem to go my way.
Everyone hates me, even my brain..
I just accidently triggered the side that make me sane,
Under the circumstances I'm in i think i deserve respect
cause these rhymes that i write all day
make me sweat because I'm a threat to myself.
I'm having an intervention and pretending that my intention
Is not to cause harm, I say don't be alarmed if you saw me armed
Poppin 3 pills with a glock in my arm, Cause you should
be scared if you dared to mess with me,
So dont *uck with me cause I;ll let you see
The f*cking dark side of me.
I think there's something wrong with me
from injectin these diseased needles, I don't
read labels, I go over the corresponding amount
till i start to cough and blood comes out of my mouth.
I hopped into a hospital where they were doin a blood test
Hopped in the back and gave myself a drug test,
I tested positiv for hepatitis B, no wonder
I rap so blindly I cant even see,
Sometimes I don't even understand half the words I say
Metaphors and similes dont seem to go my way.
Everyone hates me, even my brain..
I just accidently triggered the side that make me sane,
Under the circumstances I'm in i think i deserve respect
cause these rhymes that i write all day
make me sweat because I'm a threat to myself.
I'm having an intervention and pretending that my intention
Is not to cause harm, I say don't be alarmed if you saw me armed
Poppin 3 pills with a glock in my arm, Cause you should
be scared if you dared to mess with me,
So dont *uck with me cause I;ll let you see
The f*cking dark side of me.
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Gibns (06-02-2014), Coincidence (06-02-2014)
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It was pretty good man. Keep it up
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Drizze wrote Opinions on this, a verse from my ep, It;s still a draft so needs to be cleaned up.I really like that ending. Keep up the good work!
I think there's something wrong with me
from injectin these diseased needles, I don't
read labels, I go over the corresponding amount
till i start to cough and blood comes out of my mouth.
I hopped into a hospital where they were doin a blood test
Hopped in the back and gave myself a drug test,
I tested positiv for hepatitis B, no wonder
I rap so blindly I cant even see,
Sometimes I don't even understand half the words I say
Metaphors and similes dont seem to go my way.
Everyone hates me, even my brain..
I just accidently triggered the side that make me sane,
Under the circumstances I'm in i think i deserve respect
cause these rhymes that i write all day
make me sweat because I'm a threat to myself.
I'm having an intervention and pretending that my intention
Is not to cause harm, I say don't be alarmed if you saw me armed
Poppin 3 pills with a glock in my arm, Cause you should
be scared if you dared to mess with me,
So dont *uck with me cause I;ll let you see
The f*cking dark side of me.
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Coincidence wrote It was pretty good man. Keep it upThank you, I appriciate it.
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Really nice ben keep up the good work ;)
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This is your best one this is nice man keep it up <3
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Pretty cool man keep it up!
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I think somebody should actually record themselves rapping this and upload it...
great work
great work
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-Trusted wrote This is your best one this is nice man keep it up <3`Than you, it means so much.
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Shiv wrote I think somebody should actually record themselves rapping this and upload it...I'm planning to once I get a mic, Thanks!!
great work
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