At first you talk to fast i am from England and only just manage to keep up.
There was silence in the middle of the video i though i muted my youtube
You made a few mistakes and burped and said excuse me, If you make a mistake or something like that redo it or edit it out. (Really Bad that one )
I would play 15 games and use smaller clips of him not just scoring but highlighting his assists and his dribbling.
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Im not a Youtuber and never will be. Hope this helps and good luck