its a nice compilation, but that's all it is, a compilation. there's some nice clips in there, but you gotta be careful, your friends are saying some reckless stuff.
besides that. i think your clips should be longer, meaning it should lead up to the kills, not exactly the 5-10 seconds of you getting the kills, if that makes sense.
And have a separate record where you can only hear your voice. just seems a bit more professional to not have your friends yell over all your clips, and your on pc, you have more at your disposal, you could add background music, more editing etc.