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So I wanted to update this tattoo shops logo for them.
Just doing it for fun right now...
But how do you think this looks?

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Looks sleek and clean but one thing...


I would personally find another way to bring the "T" and "w" together

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The needle kinda looks like it clashes a little bit with the thing around the N above it
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Forgot to mention this but I wouldn't have put that little point by the T and W, would've looked cleaner just straight but I like it
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I like the design!
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I like this.
9/10
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For a wordmark its pretty good mate.

I love how you implemented the tattoo gun
into the design. However, yes there is a however
lol. If your going to add an image to the wordmark
then try not to over do it with other little bits.

I like how you combined the T to the W but the
little slice is not really needed in the W.

The Z also just makes the whole mark quite
complicated. Stick to one thing to make it a
clean cut design.
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DaemonInkz wrote For a wordmark its pretty good mate.

I love how you implemented the tattoo gun
into the design. However, yes there is a however
lol. If your going to add an image to the wordmark
then try not to over do it with other little bits.

I like how you combined the T to the W but the
little slice is not really needed in the W.

The Z also just makes the whole mark quite
complicated. Stick to one thing to make it a
clean cut design.

Yeah thats kind of what I was thinking when I was making it. Too much going on.
I'll have to cut out some of the other stuff, and post a new version.
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Looking forward to what you got mate.

Keep up the good work fella.
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I thin there is a little too much going on in the design to be an effective logo.
Looking at a glance you're not sure what you're looking at.
A good logo is very direct and is supposed to be easily read and easily recognizable.
Just some words of advise from someone who does this daily.
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