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so ive only really started doing gfx design but i gotta do it all on my android since my computer is broken. Ive made a few little things here and there but this is the first youtube banner as such which is completed. I use photoshop touch on android. Feedback and tips are welcome.

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Not bad, man I'd give it a 7/10 for a beginner
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Not bad for a beginner, a few things you'll need to improve on but that is what you can work on by watching Youtube tutorials. The blending doesn't look right and the colour for the text looks odd. 5/10
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No offense but don't call it "gfx design" because this isn't graphics at all. Look up actual Graphic Design.

Nothing really fits. You have a black and white background with blue/tan text and it doesn't fit together.

The twitter/instagram/snapchat logos don't fit either, feels like they were put there and nothing was done with them.

This also should be fixed, kind of an eyesore. [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]

Maybe 3/10 right now
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It's alright. Not a big fan of the black and white, just feels out of place. But not shabby. 5/10
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It's actually don't look that bad man.

6/10
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Quite different then some of the nonsense you see on here. I like it.

7.43/10.
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Stro wrote No offense but don't call it "gfx design" because this isn't graphics at all. Look up actual Graphic Design.

Nothing really fits. You have a black and white background with blue/tan text and it doesn't fit together.

The twitter/instagram/snapchat logos don't fit either, feels like they were put there and nothing was done with them.

This also should be fixed, kind of an eyesore. [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]

Maybe 3/10 right now


-Deluge down voting your comment, however this is all true, your text does not suit the background and the social media logos do not have any purpose, yeah it says you have a snapchat bla bla bla, but you don't have the account links written next to them? The colour is too bold and contrasting, blue ontop of black with a strong background shadow? And then the full colour social media logos just sat at the bottom.

If you can't handle the truth don't post a forum asking for feedback.
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Stro wrote No offense but don't call it "gfx design" because this isn't graphics at all. Look up actual Graphic Design.

Nothing really fits. You have a black and white background with blue/tan text and it doesn't fit together.

The twitter/instagram/snapchat logos don't fit either, feels like they were put there and nothing was done with them.

This also should be fixed, kind of an eyesore. [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]

Maybe 3/10 right now


-Deluge down voting your comment, however this is all true, your text does not suit the background and the social media logos do not have any purpose, yeah it says you have a snapchat bla bla bla, but you don't have the account links written next to them? The colour is too bold and contrasting, blue ontop of black with a strong background shadow? And then the full colour social media logos just sat at the bottom.

If you can't handle the truth don't post a forum asking for feedback.
Exactly. It's sad when people ask for feedback and then get butthurt when the truth is told. Sorry, but I'm not going to say your work is good when it's not.
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Needs a great deal of work..nothing blends well and it just bothers me 3/10
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