I love the piece but imo the text just isn't fitting. It looks like something that'd say happy birthday on a card, not to be used as an advertisement of a camera.

Pish wrote I like the overall piece....but
There is something about the text that doesnt fit.
Looks more like a competition flyer.

Thats just my view Still a nice piece

I kind of agree, the actual image is flawless, but the text just doesn't fit properly with the scenery/setting. I'm not to sure how to describe it. But great job regardless.

CriticaI wrote

Pish wrote I like the overall piece....but
There is something about the text that doesnt fit.
Looks more like a competition flyer.

Thats just my view Still a nice piece

What do you mean by competition flyer?

The swirls and confetti effect makes it look like a celebration of some sort, kinda thing I would put on a competition flyer. (Advertisment for a competition)

The piece is very peaceful and soft and then the hectic typeface ruins it.

Pish wrote

CriticaI wrote

Pish wrote I like the overall piece....but
There is something about the text that doesnt fit.
Looks more like a competition flyer.

Thats just my view Still a nice piece

What do you mean by competition flyer?

The swirls and confetti effect makes it look like a celebration of some sort, kinda thing I would put on a competition flyer. (Advertisment for a competition)

The piece is very peaceful and soft and then the hectic typeface ruins it.

Oh
Ok now I see what you mean.
Thanks.

Pish wrote

The swirls and confetti effect makes it look like a celebration of some sort, kinda thing I would put on a competition flyer. (Advertisment for a competition)

The piece is very peaceful and soft and then the hectic typeface ruins it.

That's what I was getting at.., just couldn't think of the right words.