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Wan
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Check it out, would love some feedback!
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Nice bro

Gooood job
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TTG-Apollo wrote Nice bro

Gooood job


Thanks bro, got anything you would improve?
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some of the lyrics just kinda dont sound good with your flow. Youve got the flow, but at times I cant really understand what youre saying, and when I can sometimes what you say just doesnt make sense.

Its not bad, I would just work on speaking more clearly. btw are you a white african? or are you just using that as your rap name ?
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Qwel wrote some of the lyrics just kinda dont sound good with your flow. Youve got the flow, but at times I cant really understand what youre saying, and when I can sometimes what you say just doesnt make sense.

Its not bad, I would just work on speaking more clearly. btw are you a white african? or are you just using that as your rap name ?


Yeah I understand I've always been a little poor at pronouncing some of my words. I'm from South Africa I grew up in Johannesburg and people use to say 'Shouldn't you be black?' So I got really annoyed at people saying I should be black so I came up with the name White African Poet.
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