I personally think it looks wonderful, job well done.

9/10 for sure! :bigups:

Halo4 wrote I personally think it looks wonderful, job well done.

9/10 for sure! :bigups:

Staff vouch! ^^^

I think it looks awesome man. 8/10 easily.

I really like it, 8.5/10.
The only thing that looks a little off is the text, but other than that, nice!

8.5 lad keep it up the only thing is that the text looks odd being placed there

The dimensions just give it an awkward overall feel while the text and 3D render (top right) are extremely out of place.
Replace the text with a more fitting style, placement, and size as well as removing/replacing the 3D fractal. (NOT with another 3D fractal)
Once you have done that and you touch up the blending try adding a single light source with some ambient undertones, because you have 3 conflicting light sources at the moment. The piece need quite a lot of work but if you follow those suggestions it will blend better and increase the over all quality.

Current Rating: 4/10

Lighting Error Diagram:

Main problem I immediately came across was the text. Seems too small and the back glow that's with it makes it lost in the picture and looks a bit tacky.

But as I read on, I noticed Zef pointed out the lighting issues, pick an angle and stick with it mate. I would have just stuck with the light striking the helmet and work from there with shadowing.

But overall it's alright, 6/10.

(Oh and you said you don't like it, do stuff that you have confidence in, stuff that you're proud to show off)

Nice one man, very smart ;)

8.5/10

Zef wrote The dimensions just give it an awkward overall feel while the text and 3D render (top right) are extremely out of place.
Replace the text with a more fitting style, placement, and size as well as removing/replacing the 3D fractal. (NOT with another 3D fractal)
Once you have done that and you touch up the blending try adding a single light source with some ambient undertones, because you have 3 conflicting light sources at the moment. The piece need quite a lot of work but if you follow those suggestions it will blend better and increase the over all quality.

Current Rating: 4/10

Lighting Error Diagram:

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Light 1 and 3 are acceptable (if you add an actual source for light 3) but light 2 is very contradicting.

I know light source on the right was out of place. I did not like how I made it come down through the arm, but I am currently fixing what you said to see the outcome and text placement.

~ To everyone else, thank you for your input and for the text I moved it