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deadvolts
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Hi, I've made this portrait for one of my art projects in school. It is made with many different shapes and is not yet complete. Constructive criticism and any tips/help would be greatly appreciated,
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If anyone could leave some feedback it would help me out a ton! If anyone could I would appreciate it greatly.
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Sweet man, look epic

9/10

-Olly
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This looks really cool! I'd give it an 8/10 :-)
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Thanks for the feedback, any tips you could give?
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Not bad for the illustration. - What's with the shading? Ruins the work, imo.

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Hmm well i think its a nice picture good job
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WlLL wrote Not bad for the illustration. - What's with the shading? Ruins the work, imo.

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Thanks for the feedback, I've just been experimenting with different designs and ideas.
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I would work on the light, which seems really weird right now.
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Well its good..cant rate it but.

-Fix the shading on the face..it ruins the face.

-Try and make the lines..not like shapes. Try to make them curve

-Try adjusting the color of the skin which interferes with my first tip.

-The nose is very hard to see.
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