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First GFX in a while, Critique?
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T-Dizzyy
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I haven't did graphics in about a year now but some this is to see if I still
have knowledge in the whole concept of Graphics.

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A rate would be much appreciated and say you like and don't like about it.

Thanks.


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Get a bit more creative. I see a piece with about 5 to 8 layers, with nothing really pushed to make a true design. You can play with simple things, such as connecting letters together or extending descenders a bit more, anything.
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I don't like it very much, it's very simple but tbh I can't do GFX at all so who am I to judge
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The shadow should me more symmetrical.
Could choose a better font and the emboss isnt that great although a decent gfx.
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Muah wrote Get a bit more creative. I see a piece with about 5 to 8 layers, with nothing really pushed to make a true design. You can play with simple things, such as connecting letters together or extending descenders a bit more, anything.


Thanks for the advice and yes it was only 9 layers but it was just to see if i could still create something simple way to begin with.

I'll take that advice on mate.

Cheers
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Is nice it dosent look that bad
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vSpaceGhost wrote Is nice it dosent look that bad


Well thanks a lot man first piece of work in a while, hope to finish my latest piece soon but yeah I appreciate it.
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It's good work but you need to be more creative with your work, not just Text and a pattern background. Try using flares or 3D art.
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I would say the text is ok...

But the bg doesn't match. Maybe a metal grid texture would help.
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Honestly I dont really like it :/ You should try something like this

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I made it for a friend that just joined the clan liked.
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