Maybe it would be a better to remove the prices part from the original post.

Then put something like "If they like your work please take a second to drop a sub on youtube"

Your work is very much beginner style and you need to practice a lot.
So use this opportunity to practice and not worry about whether you get subs and what not.

Prices(FREE if you sub)
That is the thing i am a beginner. I just started about 2 weeks ago. Also i have did a free service before and i did about 20-30 BG's and other things for free for everyone and while i did that i was like a sub to my channel would be nice or +rep and you know the only thing I got from that was 1 person TheTechNews liked what i made for him and he repped me +50 points so yeah either you pay or you sub. I know i need practice. And i am really tired of all of these post about ur shit and no ones gonna pay.if they would read the freaking post. also that guy with the sonic avatar. GTFO and go somewhere idgaf about ur opinion