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A nice improvement from your previous work, but definitely not a 10/10 as claimed so many times.
Also did you try to base it off the wolves logo? Seems to have been a huge influence at least,
then again most e-sports logos look the same honestly.
First, about all of the edges are super choppy, as they are usually on most of your designs.
I don't get it, but whatever. It's pretty clear it was made in photoshop as well, which is a big no no
if you even want your logo to even be usable.
Second, the shield is way out of alignment, and super disproportionate.
Note how the shield seems to be a bit more wide, and edges over more on that right side:
The transparency of the outline text doesn't look great when it runs off that shield:
(Not to mention that text really doesn't look that great in the first place.)
The wolf base shape looks decent, however your white highlights look odd in some places.
(Nose, back, nearing that chest doesn't quite go with the base shape)
This bit right here just looks especially lazy, especially with that shadow:
Which leads me to my last bit of advice, lose the drop shadow.
It looks out of place on about all of the places that you chose to apply it.
Only so many people can make that clash of flat/realism look good, and it takes a hell of a lot more than a simple drop shadow to do so.
However, it is an improvement of your work.
And if you want an honest rating it would be more around a 4-5/10.
Also did you try to base it off the wolves logo? Seems to have been a huge influence at least,
then again most e-sports logos look the same honestly.
First, about all of the edges are super choppy, as they are usually on most of your designs.
I don't get it, but whatever. It's pretty clear it was made in photoshop as well, which is a big no no
if you even want your logo to even be usable.
Second, the shield is way out of alignment, and super disproportionate.
Note how the shield seems to be a bit more wide, and edges over more on that right side:
The transparency of the outline text doesn't look great when it runs off that shield:
(Not to mention that text really doesn't look that great in the first place.)
The wolf base shape looks decent, however your white highlights look odd in some places.
(Nose, back, nearing that chest doesn't quite go with the base shape)
This bit right here just looks especially lazy, especially with that shadow:
Which leads me to my last bit of advice, lose the drop shadow.
It looks out of place on about all of the places that you chose to apply it.
Only so many people can make that clash of flat/realism look good, and it takes a hell of a lot more than a simple drop shadow to do so.
However, it is an improvement of your work.
And if you want an honest rating it would be more around a 4-5/10.
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Absolutely tremendous 17.5/10
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Looks like the Copenhagen Wolves logo lmao
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furlo wrote A nice improvement from your previous work, but definitely not a 10/10 as claimed so many times.
Also did you try to base it off the wolves logo? Seems to have been a huge influence at least,
then again most e-sports logos look the same honestly.
First, about all of the edges are super choppy, as they are usually on most of your designs.
I don't get it, but whatever. It's pretty clear it was made in photoshop as well, which is a big no no
if you even want your logo to even be usable.
Second, the shield is way out of alignment, and super disproportionate.
Note how the shield seems to be a bit more wide, and edges over more on that right side:
The transparency of the outline text doesn't look great when it runs off that shield:
(Not to mention that text really doesn't look that great in the first place.)
The wolf base shape looks decent, however your white highlights look odd in some places.
(Nose, back, nearing that chest doesn't quite go with the base shape)
This bit right here just looks especially lazy, especially with that shadow:
Which leads me to my last bit of advice, lose the drop shadow.
It looks out of place on about all of the places that you chose to apply it.
Only so many people can make that clash of flat/realism look good, and it takes a hell of a lot more than a simple drop shadow to do so.
However, it is an improvement of your work.
And if you want an honest rating it would be more around a 4-5/10.
Thank you that is done awesome feedback!
Sorry for the short reply I'm using my phone.
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A hint to everyone posting feedback other than furlo. No piece of work should be 10/10. There is always something that could use more work or detail.
To the OP, isn't bad I do like it. You used a nice scheme of colors and stuck with minimal typefaces and didn't go too over the top. It is pretty clean, I honestly don't know what I would fix. Maybe someone else can clarify what could use adjustments. Other than that good work. Look forward to seeing more from you in the future.
To the OP, isn't bad I do like it. You used a nice scheme of colors and stuck with minimal typefaces and didn't go too over the top. It is pretty clean, I honestly don't know what I would fix. Maybe someone else can clarify what could use adjustments. Other than that good work. Look forward to seeing more from you in the future.
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Logo looks awesome bro!
Keep up the good work !
10/10
Keep up the good work !
10/10
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I think it looks awesome, good job
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