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Alright so i haven't posted any of my raps on here in awhile ive just been busy

But here is my new Rap "I'm Gone" please leave feedback and maybe a like if you enjoy it.

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I think when you start rapping you need to lower the volume of the track and up the volume on your mic/whatever you are using.

Sometimes felt it was hard to hear.
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Mickers wrote I think when you start rapping you need to lower the volume of the track and up the volume on your mic/whatever you are using.

Sometimes felt it was hard to hear.
Agree. Also the bass takes over quite alot. Well for me anyway.
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I agree with the others. You should lower the Bass and the Volume of the track.
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Thanks for the feedback guys. I am not very good at editing or anything yet most of my tracks have been to quite so this time i raised it but i guess i have raised it to much i will try and find a better balance next time
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First off, mic quality. Second; you need to work on your flow. It sounds like you are having a hard time fully spitting out off of that tempo.
You need more emotion in your music. Word play was great though.
I loved the beat and the story.
Get more confident in yourself and it will show in your music.
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