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Can i have some feedback on this rap I just recorded?
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Hey guys,
I was just wondering. Can I have some feedback on this song I just recorded?
That would awesome!!

Well, I am a 16 year old rapper and I love to make music. I've been recording for about a year now. Just been trying to get better with the whole recording/editing process. Just have a little set up in my room haha.

So yeah. Any type of feedback would be great!

Thanks guys.

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Good song, much better than I could make.

But, I found it kinda awkward how you would rap a few lyrics then the beat would drag on.

Overall, it was pretty good man.
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Thanks man!

And yeah... Are you talking about in between the verses..Where i was pretty much talking?

Yeah haha. I kinda got impatient and didn't feel like writing actual lyrics for that middle part...So i kinda just said some words that popped up in my head and i guess kinda improvised.
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I'd like to start off by saying I'm not a huge rap fan. I mostly just listen to underground but, you definitely have talent. The lyrics are pretty good in my opinion because I'm not into the whole "money, hoes, and drugs." theme that most mainstream rappers seem to go after. If music is your passion then I'd urge you to continue because you could literally make a difference in the music industry one day.
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Thank you so much man.
That actually made my day...

And yeah. I really do enjoy music. So i think i'm gonna stick to it.
If not a recording artist, I'd enjoy being an audio engineer.
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Products wrote Thank you so much man.
That actually made my day...

And yeah. I really do enjoy music. So i think i'm gonna stick to it.
If not a recording artist, I'd enjoy being an audio engineer.


No problem man I'll post this link to a few other sites I frequent and maybe get you a little more exposure. Keep up the good work.
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