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BIur
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I'm looking for some feedback on this banner.

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Thanks to anyone who gives me advice! I appreciate it greatly.



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#2. Posted:
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I like it 8/10

I would have put the lense flair on the corner of the B, making it look like the reflections off the letter.

Or blurred the letting a bit to go along with the name.

THats just my opinion tho.
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5/10
Good Attempt.

Pros.
Its a good concept.
I like the font.

Cons.
The Lens Flare is tack.
The Blur doesnt shout blur!

How to improve it.
Get a stock image of a lens flare and overlay it and make it white so you dont have that weird refraction stuff to the right of the R And have the lens flare over the top of the B so it looks like its coming of it.

Use motion blur to the right not super strong just enough so it looks slightly blurry but still easily readable


Also not sure if its just me I havent actually checked but the blur looks off centered?
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BIur
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B-17 wrote 5/10
Good Attempt.

Pros.
Its a good concept.
I like the font.

Cons.
The Lens Flare is tack.
The Blur doesnt shout blur!

How to improve it.
Get a stock image of a lens flare and overlay it and make it white so you dont have that weird refraction stuff to the right of the R And have the lens flare over the top of the B so it looks like its coming of it.

Use motion blur to the right not super strong just enough so it looks slightly blurry but still easily readable


Also not sure if its just me I havent actually checked but the blur looks off centered?


Thank you very much for your feedback!
#5. Posted:
BIur
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Please, if you look or view this post, please leave some feedback. I would gladly be ok with constructive criticism so that I can get better as I go! Anything posted will be taken into consideration, and thank you in advance for any feedback.
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