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I never really got used to Illustrator however, I was impressed by the results of using it last year. I decided to start using it again since well I am looking for better results..

Here is the final result;

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It didn't take long, however it's a very versatile logo matches almost any color!

Please leave any kind of feedback, wether it's good or bad?

Once again, Peace!

EDIT: I forgot to mention, the logo in the centre itself was Illustrated, the background/text etc was Photoshopped and please excuse the marking at the bottom, it's just there for me to remember what project I am currently on. Also I should have decided to use another name for it but alpha (being first n'all I decided that) district 9 is already used, so I might change it to design 9

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Simply complex, the concept is pretty good I dig it.
But there is a problem with the execution, the line work is choppy
[corners of curves, circular edges, 'A' underflick] and looks layered.
I would recommend throwing the .png in illustrator to smooth it into a nice vector.
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Looks like you copied the cloud nine logo and got rid of a 9
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The corners are very sharp and rugged. I would recommend fixing that.
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JDI wrote Looks like you copied the cloud nine logo and got rid of a 9
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Any logo with a '9' it is going to look similar.

The logo itself was originally from the idea of 'Logobully'.

It was my first attempt, not meaning everything as it's very difficult.

The interface of Illustrator is more complex. I'll tell you what...

Why don't you go ahead and try and make a replica of this logo using the 'cloud 9' one.
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illume wrote
JDI wrote Looks like you copied the cloud nine logo and got rid of a 9
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Any logo with a '9' it is going to look similar.

The logo itself was originally from the idea of 'Logobully'.

It was my first attempt, not meaning everything as it's very difficult.

The interface of Illustrator is more complex. I'll tell you what...

Why don't you go ahead and try and make a replica of this logo using the 'cloud 9' one.


First of all dude, he was simply pointing out a similarity in design. Now with that kind of defensive statement it leads me to believe what he said is in fact very true. Granted yes, its obvious you made it but the concept is very very similar. And there really is no need to 'challenge' someone (who probably does not even make graphics) to make a logo due to your dislike to their observation, that is quite childish, defensive and uncalled for.
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Zef wrote
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JDI wrote Looks like you copied the cloud nine logo and got rid of a 9
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Any logo with a '9' it is going to look similar.

The logo itself was originally from the idea of 'Logobully'.

It was my first attempt, not meaning everything as it's very difficult.

The interface of Illustrator is more complex. I'll tell you what...

Why don't you go ahead and try and make a replica of this logo using the 'cloud 9' one.


First of all dude, he was simply pointing out a similarity in design. Now with that kind of defensive statement it leads me to believe what he said is in fact very true. Granted yes, its obvious you made it but the concept is very very similar. And there really is no need to 'challenge' someone (who probably does not even make graphics) to make a logo due to your dislike to their observation, that is quite childish, defensive and uncalled for.


I already apologised to him via PM. Yes I admit there is some similarities however I personally found it kind of offensive from him posting it. I would have done the same if I found someone doing the same, granted. Again I have apologised for what I said but, I didn't mean it to be offensive, I was basically saying "I don't even think it's possible to make that from that unless you're reasonably experienced' I just put it into the wrong context.. I am not arguing about this, as again I have most likely put this into the wrong context.
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I agree with CriticaI, your going to want to fix the rugged edges and such.
That's what makes or breaks a logo like this
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I really like this, 9/10.
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It looks really really nice. But the corners are rugged.



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