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What do you think of my first verse?(Rap)
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Hey guys!
I just wrote and recorded this first verse of my song.
It's about suicide...
But yeah. can i please have some feedback on it?
even if i'm terrible..Feedback just helps me grow.
Oh, Btw. I'm a 15 year old rapper. I recently moved to Oregon from Cali...
But I love making music. I'm actually taking a recording and editing class this year!
I think that'll be a good experience for me..But yeah guys. Here it is:
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I just wrote and recorded this first verse of my song.
It's about suicide...
But yeah. can i please have some feedback on it?
even if i'm terrible..Feedback just helps me grow.
Oh, Btw. I'm a 15 year old rapper. I recently moved to Oregon from Cali...
But I love making music. I'm actually taking a recording and editing class this year!
I think that'll be a good experience for me..But yeah guys. Here it is:
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its not that bad, its kinda good for being 15. But im just curious, why is it about suicide?
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Thanks!
And to be honest..I enjoy making raps that have a deep meaning you know?
Raps that tell a story.
I don't know..I just think it grabs the listeners attention a little more.
And to be honest..I enjoy making raps that have a deep meaning you know?
Raps that tell a story.
I don't know..I just think it grabs the listeners attention a little more.
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Products wrote Thanks!
And to be honest..I enjoy making raps that have a deep meaning you know?
Raps that tell a story.
I don't know..I just think it grabs the listeners attention a little more.
thats a good point. Especially if the listener has been through some things and they can relate to it
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