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Adio199
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Hey everyone, here's my first speedart, It's not my best work but can I have some feedback and maybe a like

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Mxstyy
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I'm sorry but I really do dislike the banner. None of the colours flow and the pattern over the text looks disgusting. It looks like you just threw on as many effects as you could and left it. The 3D text doesn't look very good - you should try 2D instead - and it wasn't the best font to use. Overall, I'd rate it a 4/10 because the lighting is good and you attempted 3D work, which isn't the easiest. But you really need to work on blending the colours together and don't use as many effects; it ruins it
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Adio199
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Mxstyy wrote I'm sorry but I really do dislike the banner. None of the colours flow and the pattern over the text looks disgusting. It looks like you just threw on as many effects as you could and left it. The 3D text doesn't look very good - you should try 2D instead - and it wasn't the best font to use. Overall, I'd rate it a 4/10 because the lighting is good and you attempted 3D work, which isn't the easiest. But you really need to work on blending the colours together and don't use as many effects; it ruins it


That's exactly what I did for this BG tbh I only started GFX like 3 days ago :s I'm still learning
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theres my portfolio wouldn't say it's that good, but not bad for someone who just started :s
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yh i puked up mate not worthy of my viewing #NotFresh need to improve yer skills
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You need to work more on you render, that render style was popular back in 2011 and now it's just disgusting. Look up some tutorials on YouTube on plugins like Thrausi,Nitroblast and Reeper X ;)
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