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(First 2 lines are the same as a diff song)
I get this paranormal activity that shivers me and im cold and i cant sleep
as i creep in this haunted house trapped nd wrapped in a sheet
as i escape to the front porche right about to re-treat
while these evil spirits not allowing me to leave
and im trapped in the base-ment,3 times stabbed in the base ribs
smash through a shut window and escape the haunted crib
walk up to the face of satan as he starts his strangulation
and im lying on the floor choking on my own blood praying
then i ressurect pick up the gasoline and pour
burning down the whole house so il start with the front door
finished with burns marked on my devilous claws
while the evilness flows around my head and and down into my jaws
as i injest and invest it this is what feeling like death is
go back to kill the spirits while there bodys digesting
my skin plasters,satan calls me a sick bastard
ghosts leave the town like its a evil disaster,im evil remaster'ed
as my skin turns red and the devils dead stand confused as horns eject from my head
realise that im the devil need a excercism to keep down my tempature level
realise its just a dream,back in the basment and start to scream
extreme spirits hold me down as i squim break loose and take a pause
look and fall from a window 30 feet tall
I get this paranormal activity that shivers me and im cold and i cant sleep
as i creep in this haunted house trapped nd wrapped in a sheet
as i escape to the front porche right about to re-treat
while these evil spirits not allowing me to leave
and im trapped in the base-ment,3 times stabbed in the base ribs
smash through a shut window and escape the haunted crib
walk up to the face of satan as he starts his strangulation
and im lying on the floor choking on my own blood praying
then i ressurect pick up the gasoline and pour
burning down the whole house so il start with the front door
finished with burns marked on my devilous claws
while the evilness flows around my head and and down into my jaws
as i injest and invest it this is what feeling like death is
go back to kill the spirits while there bodys digesting
my skin plasters,satan calls me a sick bastard
ghosts leave the town like its a evil disaster,im evil remaster'ed
as my skin turns red and the devils dead stand confused as horns eject from my head
realise that im the devil need a excercism to keep down my tempature level
realise its just a dream,back in the basment and start to scream
extreme spirits hold me down as i squim break loose and take a pause
look and fall from a window 30 feet tall
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Man I kinda like it, could you rap to a beat? for example a good one is 3AM by Eminem.
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Thanks dude yes its my rap And yeh me too <3
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Man I kinda like it, could you rap to a beat? like a beat,for example a good one is 3AM by Eminem.
nice to see sum new questions cuz i dont get asked that 3 times a day when i get a mic i shall record and dont worry i hav sum pretty sick beats
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OfficialZep wroteMan I kinda like it, could you rap to a beat? like a beat,for example a good one is 3AM by Eminem.
nice to see sum new questions cuz i dont get asked that 3 times a day when i get a mic i shall record and dont worry i hav sum pretty sick beats
For sure man , do you have like twitter or something? I would like to have a freestyle battle sometime
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yo my facebook is OfficialZep if you want to hit me up there bro and yeh sure
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I enjoyed reading that you are very good.
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Sounds pretty good so far bro.. Now if we hear it with a beat that would be sickk...
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You've been posting a few lines this past week!
I think it's time you drop it onto a beat now!
I think it's time you drop it onto a beat now!
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