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hello guys. well i got bored and thought i would try something different for a change and thought i would give space ago, photoshop crashed on me 3 times so i had to keep re doing it lol. i personally like the outcome of it, ...but what do you guys think?
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I think its pretty cool 8/10
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What did you create??
2 stocks on a black background??
2 planets created from scratch?
Its plane and proportions are way out.
Personally i would rate 4/10
2 stocks on a black background??
2 planets created from scratch?
Its plane and proportions are way out.
Personally i would rate 4/10
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CDR wrote What did you create??
2 stocks on a black background??
2 planets created from scratch?
Its plane and proportions are way out.
Personally i would rate 4/10
appreciate the feedback but there is more then 2 sticks on a black background and 2 planets created from scractch.and how are the planets out of proportion may i ask?? as yo see below. there are more then 4 layers which you are accusing (:
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i would love to see what you can come up with though...
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I feel you could of added more, and its kinda bla, I would overall give you a 4/10
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RGBaKeD wrote I feel you could of added more, and its kinda bla, I would overall give you a 4/10
thank you for the comment and vote and yes its not a finnished product yet there is more to come, would just like to hear peoples feed back and improvements (:
plus space is a hard project to work on because it can easily be over done and ruined, i adding space shuttles etc but it looked too much but keep looking back to see it progress!
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It's.. bland.
I would avoid those types of flares as they look cheesy imo. I would also veer away using glows unless you make the distance a little bigger. Thick glowey lines look fake.
I actually prefer V1 more.
I get it you want to use a watermark, but try to stay away from the graffiti fonts. Maybe make a logo and smack that bad boy in the corner?
Nice try, keep at it.
I would avoid those types of flares as they look cheesy imo. I would also veer away using glows unless you make the distance a little bigger. Thick glowey lines look fake.
I actually prefer V1 more.
I get it you want to use a watermark, but try to stay away from the graffiti fonts. Maybe make a logo and smack that bad boy in the corner?
Nice try, keep at it.
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Nyan wrote It's.. bland.
I would avoid those types of flares as they look cheesy imo. I would also veer away using glows unless you make the distance a little bigger. Thick glowey lines look fake.
I actually prefer V1 more.
I get it you want to use a watermark, but try to stay away from the graffiti fonts. Maybe make a logo and smack that bad boy in the corner?
Nice try, keep at it.
I have to agree that I like the first one better, even though it's a little too dark for my taste.
And the stock images, glows, and flares don't really help the piece in my opinion, you could make your own flares and glows by yourself, and make them look better with the actual space art that you created.
That being said, since you actually named your layers and kept things somewhat organized impressed me. You'd be surprised how many people don't actually use layers and what not.
Take mine and everyone else's criticisms lightly, don't take them to heart.
Keep improving, I want to see what you're really capable of!
And the stock images, glows, and flares don't really help the piece in my opinion, you could make your own flares and glows by yourself, and make them look better with the actual space art that you created.
That being said, since you actually named your layers and kept things somewhat organized impressed me. You'd be surprised how many people don't actually use layers and what not.
Take mine and everyone else's criticisms lightly, don't take them to heart.
Keep improving, I want to see what you're really capable of!
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thank you all for your feedback and i defiantly will take it into consideration and use the information for my next piece! (:
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