Very nice, it's a shame that YouTube is limited to 30fps because it looks quite choppy.

9/10

3/10. Im giving it that just cause you got the syncing good. But the beginning was ugly with that swearly effect on it. And idk if you where trying to motion track or not but the text was ugly. It also looked like you just though on random effect. It looks like you edited in sony vegas as well. I would recommend getting AE with some basic plugins such as: Twitch, Twixtor, RSMB, Looks, optical flares, shine, and other trapcode products. Just keep trying with some new effects and watch some tutorials from Baker (Bakerstuts) or other editors on youtube like EditorsSchool. Im not trying to be too harsh just giving some good feedback on what you can do to make your edits better