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Chi
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Hey guys, it's been a while since I've posted an actual piece on here,
so I figured I would try something new. A sort-of poster. Tell me what you think.



Here it is:
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I need some suggestions, or possibly even a couple of critique's.
I know about the outline of the logo itself being a little to ruff, but I'll fix it.
So yeah, just help me out, tell me if it's too simple or whatever.

Thanks,
-Chi
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I like it and the litte avatar really stands out! (So cute!) The bumpy background goes well, the only suggestion that I can think of at the moment is to change the font, in my opinion I don't think it goes too well with the cartoony avatar, but again, my opinion

8.93/10
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I love it! however, maybe try putting his head behind the 'bars' and see how that looks? Just an idea, looks great!
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This would be a nice base for a poster. Might want to cut the thickness on the line breaks though. Then make the poster look like a concert promotion put on by Neff. If you do that it can look sick.
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OOohhh what is this.....i believe its the lesser spotted creative mind......

As mentioned, its a great base.
Maybe do more with the Neff to bring it more into the focal.

Too much empty space at the top to be appealing.

But keep going. You have potential.
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