You are viewing our Forum Archives. To view or take place in current topics click here.
C4D Render with pinlights tell me what you think..
Posted:

C4D Render with pinlights tell me what you think..Posted:

T-Dizzyy
  • Challenger
Status: Offline
Joined: Jul 12, 201112Year Member
Posts: 148
Reputation Power: 5
Status: Offline
Joined: Jul 12, 201112Year Member
Posts: 148
Reputation Power: 5
[ Register or Signin to view external links. ]


Tell me what you think:)

i done a ice text with a bit of texture and transparncy and put a light room in and i thought i would add pin lights to see how it turns out took me about 15 mins tell me what yous think im going to start a new way of creating GFX . thanks


-Dizzyy
#2. Posted:
Bind
  • TTG Senior
Status: Offline
Joined: Jun 12, 200914Year Member
Posts: 1,703
Reputation Power: 93
Status: Offline
Joined: Jun 12, 200914Year Member
Posts: 1,703
Reputation Power: 93
looks very simple and very nice/clean

good job man! 9/10
#3. Posted:
Moz
  • TTG Addict
Status: Offline
Joined: Nov 06, 201112Year Member
Posts: 2,837
Reputation Power: 132
Status: Offline
Joined: Nov 06, 201112Year Member
Posts: 2,837
Reputation Power: 132
Its bad.

The whole point of a scene is to not see it.

Its also over lit for Ice effect.

Materials also need work
#4. Posted:
T-Dizzyy
  • Challenger
Status: Offline
Joined: Jul 12, 201112Year Member
Posts: 148
Reputation Power: 5
Status: Offline
Joined: Jul 12, 201112Year Member
Posts: 148
Reputation Power: 5
-Arf- wrote Its bad.

The whole point of a scene is to not see it.

Its also over lit for Ice effect.

Materials also need work


yes man but i wanted to show yous the scene because i created the scene and i wanted to let yous see how i created it, i will upload another on without it.
#5. Posted:
dude2410
  • TTG Senior
Status: Offline
Joined: Feb 17, 201014Year Member
Posts: 1,384
Reputation Power: 64
Status: Offline
Joined: Feb 17, 201014Year Member
Posts: 1,384
Reputation Power: 64
ok... so your showcasing the scene.... share your settings? because what I see is an overused lighting rig with what looks to be horribly mangled settings. But I'd like to know if I'm right. I won't tell you how to fix the settings until I see what you have. But if you post them I'll more than gladly tell you what you should change/edit in them. The render settings are arguably more important than the lighting/scene.
#6. Posted:
-Eternity-
  • New Member
Status: Offline
Joined: Jun 24, 201211Year Member
Posts: 17
Reputation Power: 0
Status: Offline
Joined: Jun 24, 201211Year Member
Posts: 17
Reputation Power: 0
Looks Nice...Better Yet... Godlike..Why? Cuz I Can't Do That To Save My Life!
#7. Posted:
GFXLegends
  • TTG Senior
Status: Offline
Joined: Mar 09, 201113Year Member
Posts: 1,124
Reputation Power: 29
Status: Offline
Joined: Mar 09, 201113Year Member
Posts: 1,124
Reputation Power: 29
lower the pin lights......dim the lighting a bit....and it will be amazing.....the reason i say lower the pin lights...is bcus they look like they are floating and that doesnt make sense....but other than that not bad bro
#8. Posted:
Illustrated
  • Ninja
Status: Offline
Joined: Jun 22, 201211Year Member
Posts: 3,432
Reputation Power: 377
Status: Offline
Joined: Jun 22, 201211Year Member
Posts: 3,432
Reputation Power: 377
Looks like you just edited the text on a Lightroom template.
If you move the lightroom of screen, so all you see if the BG and the Text, it'll look way better.
Plus, it's not even centered.
The texture on your text looks pretty bad, too, tbh.
Are you using HD render settings?
Jump to:
You are viewing our Forum Archives. To view or take place in current topics click here.