You need to focus more on technique and be able to play on count. All I'm hearing and seeing is you focusing more on the snare the most and trying to use the rest of the set which is good because well, that's where everyone starts. Personally I would learn more on counting while playing and just playing on time. Like for example, if you know any basic rock beats using the hi hat snare and bass drum, I would start from there and progressively move from there. Also, on your "double bass pedals", you can't put two bass pedals on on bass drum like that. Their suppose to be a expansion where there's suppose to be a pedal on the left near your hi hat stand and pedal and their suppose to be a pedal on the bass drum and it's suppose to be connected. Like the picture below.

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