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Gabriel (07-15-2016), Branding (07-12-2016), Spire (07-12-2016), TheNewWorld (07-12-2016), Taylor (07-12-2016)
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These are awesome Illustrated!

Nothing to critique.
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Awesome pictures, the quality doesn't shame me. Awesome work like always.
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Very nice shots man! I just recently did another photoshoot for my friends as well which I'll upload on here momentarily. My personal favorite photo you captured was the tenth. Everything about it flows extremely well.
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All are nice but get your model to wear different foot wear...

No 4 is just weird IMO

But then again I know nothing about photography.

No 2 is very good mate.
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Branding wrote All are nice but get your model to wear different foot wear...

No 4 is just weird IMO

But then again I know nothing about photography.


When it comes to photography the outfit your model wears is very important. If Samantha was wearing neon colors in the shots Erik took then it wouldn't flow with the environment she's in. I personally like the boots for the outfit as they're subtle colors and they compliment her and the environment around her very well.


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The quality of framing is improving, I see the majority of the bokeh effects are better balanced in this set than all. of your previous sets.
The top Photos in this set are as follows:

#2 - Good Emotion, Great Framing, Good Depth, Good Focus
#7 - Good Subject, Great DOF, Fair Focus, Fair Framing
#10 - Good Atmosphere , Great Angle, Good Depth, Fair Focus
#4 - Good Concept, Fair DOF, Decent Framing, Fair Focus

If you have any further question or request critique/further explanation just let me know.
Id be glad to elaborate, glad to see you are making progress.
I hope my tips and advice have helped thus far.
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Zef wrote
The quality of framing is improving, I see the majority of the bokeh effects are better balanced in this set than all. of your previous sets.
The top Photos in this set are as follows:

#2 - Good Emotion, Great Framing, Good Depth, Good Focus
#7 - Good Subject, Great DOF, Fair Focus, Fair Framing
#10 - Good Atmosphere , Great Angle, Good Depth, Fair Focus
#4 - Good Concept, Fair DOF, Decent Framing, Fair Focus

If you have any further question or request critique/further explanation just let me know.
Id be glad to elaborate, glad to see you are making progress.
I hope my tips and advice have helped thus far.

Much appreciated, sir. I always try to keep the advice in mind when I'm out shooting!
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Your subject alignment is getting a lot better.
You had some nice framing going on as well.
But all of your shots are either under exposed.
or slightly out of focus.
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CriticaI wrote
Your subject alignment is getting a lot better.
You had some nice framing going on as well.
But all of your shots are either under exposed.
or slightly out of focus.

I don't believe any of them are under exposed, besides maybe the 6th.
I specifically wanted the dark, mystical-ish feel to them...

And yeah I did notice some are slightly out of focus.
It's real hard to tell on the display in the sunlight.
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