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What do you think of my new rap?(Please give feedback)
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Hey guys!
I just wrote/recorded a new rap!
And i would love some feedback.
Feedback helps me so much with improvement.
Anyways. I'm a 15 year old from California.
I love making music. I make about 1-2 songs a day. (Mostly just to work on my delivery/flow/etc.

So yeah take a listen!
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Thanks so much guys
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Any feedback guys?
It helps out allot as a young artist.
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Pretty good, work on delivery more, I like how you put your voice into the lyrics. I listened to your other tracks sometimes the beat gets too far ahead of you because you held a word too long but other than that goodjob hh)
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I'm going to be brutally honest, It was pretty bad. You had no flow, you timing on your word play on the beat was awful. Think outside the box man, don't rap about shit no body wants to hear, I know your only 15 but c'mon.
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Would u rather me rap about money and hoes?
And thanks for the honesty!
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Products wrote Would u rather me rap about money and hoes?
And thanks for the honesty!


You already rap about tryna' get money???? I man I do like the heart you put into your voice, I viewed some of your other songs and the poetry is nice.
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