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I am getting tired of making illustrations.

When I think about it, that's all I really do, and that's all I immediately think of when I hear "Graphic Design".

Considering I don't even find my illustrations decent, I am trying to get into more useful aspects of design.

I figured I'd have a go at advertising designs...



V1
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I think I like the first version better.
But I don't know.

V2 With Colored Cans
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This is a first attempt at something like this.
I made the cans, and all.

How is it?


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I have to say I could see something like this in a store. looks really nice!
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I like it a lot! Makes me want to make some of my own advertising
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Very clean and neat as always
Only thing is the reflections. They don't quite look suited there. Just my opinion, but I would maybe remove them.
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As far as quality goes its beautiful. It is a very good advertisement.

However I spot one flaw with it and that is it doesn't really pop out at you. It doesn't catch your eye. I'd recommend changing the background to a different color than the cans for a start, it'd make them seem more defined and catch more glances. The whole point of advertising is to catch a glance and I can imagine myself walking past this a lot and not noticing it a lot.

Other than that, it is very well done.
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honestly, 10/10. I like it


keep doing what you're doing
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Looks great, looks like another one of those energy drinks.
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Boar wrote As far as quality goes its beautiful. It is a very good advertisement.

However I spot one flaw with it and that is it doesn't really pop out at you. It doesn't catch your eye. I'd recommend changing the background to a different color than the cans for a start, it'd make them seem more defined and catch more glances. The whole point of advertising is to catch a glance and I can imagine myself walking past this a lot and not noticing it a lot.

Other than that, it is very well done.


Thank you for this. I forgot about that completely haha.
I'll try an off white, or some other colors, and see how it looks.



-3D wrote Very clean and neat as always
Only thing is the reflections. They don't quite look suited there. Just my opinion, but I would maybe remove them.


Thanks for your opinion. I'll see what it looks like without them. I just made them really quickly, and didn't spend to much time perfecting them
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Reminds me bit of dr pepper, but for your first try this is pretty impressive and I could see something like this in a shop! Hope to see more work from you
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Really decent advertisement. Simple so the message is sent across straight away.

I actually love the can design of the first one using that heart illustration, could see that on a real drink.

Minor faults from me.

- I feel the space between the top of the cans and the top of the poster need to be a little bigger. Same with the 3 and and the top of the poster.

other than that it looks like a solid start of something new.

People may disagree with my suggestion, but, i think it's worth a go to see if it improves the look.
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