I agree with the above. But the rap was dope. I liked it the long hair dude was good. I could vibe to it.

The video is good but need to work on the editing bit more.

EmpT wrote I would like feedback from the 2nd music video i edited....
I use Sony Vegas pro 13,

I would appreciate feedback, I understand i'm not a professional but would like feedback

To be honest, the video was obviously shot by someone with little experience. Which is okay, like you said, it's your second video.
First off, you really need to be more creative with the scenes. In future videos, try to have the background correlate to the vibe of the song.
Also, I noticed right away that you were very still with the camera, which in this case is bad. You need a variety of not only scenes, but also angles. Maybe even some footage shot from a farther/closer difference every so often. Try and get more creative with where you shoot.
I would also make sure the you focus some attention to the color correction. Some of the colors and scenes just seemed very out of place if you know what I mean.

With all that said, for only your second video, and assuming you don't have too much invested into this yet, it was okay!