The nav bar text is way to big for nav bar text. Also the font is absolutely awful, in a web design stick to maybe two similar fonts to the max. The log/register in the top right is also too big.

I personally don't like the colour flow, I think that creamy colour is boring and throws me off completely, wen using a colour like that you really have to make it work and to be honest you don't.

- Test colour ways (try to keep your colours minimal).
- Use professional, clear and effective fonts. Client want to see a professional website, me personally if I randomly go on a website and it looks horrible, I'm off completely.


NOTE: This isn't hate.

LukeGriffiths wrote The nav bar text is way to big for nav bar text. Also the font is absolutely awful, in a web design stick to maybe two similar fonts to the max. The log/register in the top right is also too big.

I personally don't like the colour flow, I think that creamy colour is boring and throws me off completely, wen using a colour like that you really have to make it work and to be honest you don't.

- Test colour ways (try to keep your colours minimal).
- Use professional, clear and effective fonts. Client want to see a professional website, me personally if I randomly go on a website and it looks horrible, I'm off completely.


NOTE: This isn't hate.

Don't take this the wrong way, but I didn't ask for CnC and i'm definitely not taking it from a no name.

I got so much feedback on this from actual professionals , and i figured i'd just throw it up on here.

Vein wrote

LukeGriffiths wrote The nav bar text is way to big for nav bar text. Also the font is absolutely awful, in a web design stick to maybe two similar fonts to the max. The log/register in the top right is also too big.

I personally don't like the colour flow, I think that creamy colour is boring and throws me off completely, wen using a colour like that you really have to make it work and to be honest you don't.

- Test colour ways (try to keep your colours minimal).
- Use professional, clear and effective fonts. Client want to see a professional website, me personally if I randomly go on a website and it looks horrible, I'm off completely.


NOTE: This isn't hate.

Don't take this the wrong way, but I didn't ask for CnC and i'm definitely not taking it from a no name.

I got so much feedback on this from actual professionals , and i figured i'd just throw it up on here.

'actual professionals' so what do you call someone that is the industry then?

It's feedback and if you made that from feedback by 'professionals' then they're not professionals. The design is slap bang average. Deal with it.

Being newly signed up to this website doesn't label me a no name. But. whatever you say keep making your web designs that look like shitty moonfruit templates.

I personally think it looks quite good. The only issue I have is the text used on the navigation bar. I personally don't think it flows very well with the rest of the design. I do see what you were trying to pull off BUT personally, it just doesn't suit my taste. [pun]

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Also, I can't help but notice on the very right, you've completely missed a part out. It's supposed to be a creamy gradient going up on the background but on the right hand side, you've missed a bit out and its white instead of cream. It's really throwing me off.

I really want some donuts now.
mmmm.... donuts
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LukeGriffiths wrote

Vein wrote

LukeGriffiths wrote The nav bar text is way to big for nav bar text. Also the font is absolutely awful, in a web design stick to maybe two similar fonts to the max. The log/register in the top right is also too big.

I personally don't like the colour flow, I think that creamy colour is boring and throws me off completely, wen using a colour like that you really have to make it work and to be honest you don't.

- Test colour ways (try to keep your colours minimal).
- Use professional, clear and effective fonts. Client want to see a professional website, me personally if I randomly go on a website and it looks horrible, I'm off completely.


NOTE: This isn't hate.

Don't take this the wrong way, but I didn't ask for CnC and i'm definitely not taking it from a no name.

I got so much feedback on this from actual professionals , and i figured i'd just throw it up on here.

'actual professionals' so what do you call someone that is the industry then?

It's feedback and if you made that from feedback by 'professionals' then they're not professionals. The design is slap bang average. Deal with it.

Being newly signed up to this website doesn't label me a no name. But. whatever you say keep making your web designs that look like shitty moonfruit templates.

considering they work at corps, and do freelance fairly regularly, i'd consider professionals. Quite funny you say this, considering you're trying to find work on this site, but don't post a portfolio or anything, then cnc on peoples works when they don't ask for it.

Not sure what you're trying to get , but i'll just consider you a troll from this point on, good day.

Vein wrote

LukeGriffiths wrote

Vein wrote

LukeGriffiths wrote The nav bar text is way to big for nav bar text. Also the font is absolutely awful, in a web design stick to maybe two similar fonts to the max. The log/register in the top right is also too big.

I personally don't like the colour flow, I think that creamy colour is boring and throws me off completely, wen using a colour like that you really have to make it work and to be honest you don't.

- Test colour ways (try to keep your colours minimal).
- Use professional, clear and effective fonts. Client want to see a professional website, me personally if I randomly go on a website and it looks horrible, I'm off completely.


NOTE: This isn't hate.

Don't take this the wrong way, but I didn't ask for CnC and i'm definitely not taking it from a no name.

I got so much feedback on this from actual professionals , and i figured i'd just throw it up on here.

'actual professionals' so what do you call someone that is the industry then?

It's feedback and if you made that from feedback by 'professionals' then they're not professionals. The design is slap bang average. Deal with it.

Being newly signed up to this website doesn't label me a no name. But. whatever you say keep making your web designs that look like shitty moonfruit templates.

considering they work at corps, and do freelance fairly regularly, i'd consider professionals. Quite funny you say this, considering you're trying to find work on this site, but don't post a portfolio or anything, then cnc on peoples works when they don't ask for it.

Not sure what you're trying to get , but i'll just consider you a troll from this point on, good day.

Well if they influenced that design then they're bog standard designers that work for shit corporations. If they're successful designers and influenced this then they must have been drunk at the time.

I have posted my website numerous times. I've worked alongside various companies whilst I'm at uni, finding work on here is just an extra avenue. You gotta do what you gotta do. Don't cry because I gave valid and relevant feedback that you can't take.

A troll? No your design just isn't that good. What do you want? Undeserved praised to help lift your spirits?

Vein wrote

LukeGriffiths wrote The nav bar text is way to big for nav bar text. Also the font is absolutely awful, in a web design stick to maybe two similar fonts to the max. The log/register in the top right is also too big.

I personally don't like the colour flow, I think that creamy colour is boring and throws me off completely, wen using a colour like that you really have to make it work and to be honest you don't.

- Test colour ways (try to keep your colours minimal).
- Use professional, clear and effective fonts. Client want to see a professional website, me personally if I randomly go on a website and it looks horrible, I'm off completely.


NOTE: This isn't hate.

Don't take this the wrong way, but I didn't ask for CnC and i'm definitely not taking it from a no name.

I got so much feedback on this from actual professionals , and i figured i'd just throw it up on here.

Some pretty shitty professionals if they told you this looks good.

Looks like a template, in my opinion. Anybody could create this.

Not original or different.