illume wrote Oooh nvm then, still a good design, may I ask did you make the cards and paper etc?

CriticaI wrote

illume wrote Oooh nvm then, still a good design, may I ask did you make the cards and paper etc?

Nope its some random template off the internet.
Just thought it would be more appealing to look at.

Chi wrote

Looks pretty slick there Crit, love the idea.
However I'm not sure if you made the text yourself,
or if you edited a font, but the curvature on some of the letters throw it off.
You can see this especially on the outside of the "a", along with the "p".
It would look much nicer with a nice smooth font/lettering, with even curvature.

Would also look pretty sick with another connection of letters, and help with that overall flow.
Either way, pretty nice stuff here man, ups!

Chi wrote

CriticaI wrote I hand drew this.

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But how off do the letters look?
because I was going for more of a hand writing feel
rather than a clean font look.

Good on you for hand drawing man.
If you were going for handwritten, looks great.
I was only suggesting seeing it smoother, I feel it would match that connected style.
Either way it looks pretty nice.