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App Home screen Speedart, Please like,comment and sub

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I took note of the feedback given;

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AY-VE-PEA wrote [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]

k thax no one cares about your speed art, dont wanna watch too much effort, post pictures.


It is okay, it is well compiled and colours are good but it is a generic log in screen not to much to it. For an app the proportions are also good.

Also as a UX thing log in or sign up should have equal priority, so maybe a sign up button rather than a small bit of text that is low contrast and not amazingly easy to see.


I'd Love to see some stuff you do, because he is a really good graphics artist and your going to complain you cant see it and i know he said tell me what you think but damn no need to be harsh.
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AY-VE-PEA wrote [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]

k thax no one cares about your speed art, dont wanna watch too much effort, post pictures.


It is okay, it is well compiled and colours are good but it is a generic log in screen not to much to it. For an app the proportions are also good.

Also as a UX thing log in or sign up should have equal priority, so maybe a sign up button rather than a small bit of text that is low contrast and not amazingly easy to see.


I'd Love to see some stuff you do, because he is a really good graphics artist and your going to complain you cant see it and i know he said tell me what you think but damn no need to be harsh.
Ignore him, He just joined the site and has 7 posts. It's a troll, Don't feed the trolls!
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Tims_Graphics wrote
AY-VE-PEA wrote [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]

k thax no one cares about your speed art, dont wanna watch too much effort, post pictures.


It is okay, it is well compiled and colours are good but it is a generic log in screen not to much to it. For an app the proportions are also good.

Also as a UX thing log in or sign up should have equal priority, so maybe a sign up button rather than a small bit of text that is low contrast and not amazingly easy to see.


I'd Love to see some stuff you do, because he is a really good graphics artist and your going to complain you cant see it and i know he said tell me what you think but damn no need to be harsh.


Just pointing out some flaws and improvements... and let's not make this about me, shall we.

What are you his number one fan? #cut4iedit4u43. Stop being but hurt for him, that is his jobs, how about post some feedback for him to improve please and thank you.
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AY-VE-PEA wrote
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AY-VE-PEA wrote [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]

k thax no one cares about your speed art, dont wanna watch too much effort, post pictures.


It is okay, it is well compiled and colours are good but it is a generic log in screen not to much to it. For an app the proportions are also good.

Also as a UX thing log in or sign up should have equal priority, so maybe a sign up button rather than a small bit of text that is low contrast and not amazingly easy to see.


I'd Love to see some stuff you do, because he is a really good graphics artist and your going to complain you cant see it and i know he said tell me what you think but damn no need to be harsh.


Just pointing out some flaws and improvements... and let's not make this about me, shall we.

What are you his number one fan? #cut4iedit4u43. Stop being but hurt for him, that is his jobs, how about post some feedback for him to improve please and thank you.



Immaturity level = 99

#cutforiedit4u43.. Real mature..

As i clearly stated in the video description, if you bothered to look, this took me like 5 mins so no need to hate.

Pls link your port Mr. Perfectionist.
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iedit4u43 wrote App Home screen Speedart, Please like,comment and sub

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tell me what you think but don't be too harsh at it took me like 5 minutes to design.


I'd recommend just posting the final design here if you want feedback. Personally, I'll skip over speed arts.

don't be too harsh at it took me like 5 minutes to design


It doesn't matter if it took you 5 minutes or 5 hours, people will still judge it the same.

I don't like how faint the logo is, it should stand out to represent the app/company.

The email and password boxes blend into the background quite a lot, I'd either make them really faint, or really visible. They also have sharp corners, whereas the sign in box doesn't; I'd try to keep it consistent. The start of the password also starts slightly more to the left then the email address. ;)

I like the dark and yellow colour palette, but I don't think you need 2 shades of yellow for the sign in box and the icons.

I like the effect you've gone for with the 'forgot password' and sign up text, but I don't think it suits the screen. Maybe keep it the same colour as the password and email?

I think you should definitely try some more, it's always worth looking on Behance and Dribbble for some good UI/UX designers, always great for inspiration.
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AY-VE-PEA wrote [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]

k thax no one cares about your speed art, dont wanna watch too much effort, post pictures.


It is okay, it is well compiled and colours are good but it is a generic log in screen not to much to it. For an app the proportions are also good.

Also as a UX thing log in or sign up should have equal priority, so maybe a sign up button rather than a small bit of text that is low contrast and not amazingly easy to see.



That was extremely rude. There was no need for you to say that you could have simply said here is the finally result image for those who dont want to click the youtube link.


And for my opinion on the screen it is rather nice. But there is a lot of things you could have added there is no need to tell you cause it would be what i would do and this is yours so lets keep it that way.
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iedit4u43 wrote As i clearly stated in the video description, if you bothered to look, this took me like 5 mins so no need to hate.

Pls link your port Mr. Perfectionist.


1. Well then maybe you should've spent more time on it.

2. His port has nothing to do with the quality of your work.

3. Even if his work isn't good, his opinion is as valid as anyone that can see.
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I clearly stated that I was not looking for harsh criticism and saying that; no one cares about my speedart - clearly is not criticism it is just hate.
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iedit4u43 wrote I clearly stated that I was not looking for harsh criticism and saying that; no one cares about my speedart - clearly is not criticism it is just hate.

He said some bits were good, so it's not all hate, lol.
And no, this dude rarely gives pep-comments, appreciate he even replied.
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