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PREZA wrote
Chi wrote
First things first, since you're trying to tell me those are arrows, those are some of the shittiest arrows I've seen in my life.

Second if you want to try and say something about my experience as a designer, I suggest you take a look at my work, along with the people I've worked with throughout the YEARS. You're cleary trying to defend yourself desperately by saying this.

You're brandmark friend should probably find another path, because if he thinks a bold red text, goes with an underlined black, and grey under that, all in different styles, he must not be very recognizable. Let me tell you, along with many others, it looks like garbage. They are not aligned, they are all different styles, BLEH. Did you even try?

It's cool that you're attempting this project for your college, but it seems you're not the man for the job. At all. God forbid they give you feedback on it.

I used to do logo work, made a lot of money doing so (try digging through some of my posts you'll find some). The thing is I found it incredibly boring, uncreative, and just a way to make easy money. It's boring, doesn't allow me to show my style, and be me.

So please don't bore me with that noise.

You know nothing about experice or creativity.
The majority of your designs are glance work, but get boring after a minute.
Don't bring up experience or skill level, when you have no right to bring that sort of thing up.

Have fun with your project, and trying to convince yourself you are a half decent designer.
You can't give feedback,
You can't recieve feedback,
You're a dead end.

Thanks for letting me practice my phone typing skills aswell, that was fun.

Carry on now,
-Chi


Well, for first, if you're basing the overall design on two arrows that were created by someone who rarely uses the pen tool, then I'm sorry to say but you're just dull-witted.

Secondly, in my opinion, your work is garbage. Some designs I have found to be just dull and amateurish, which would make sense considering your that was your approach to my design.

As I said, this was a draft or a template. The University gave me 60% of the stuff to work with, including the colours, which had to be red black and grey. So I wasn't really working with much. My Brandmark friend is also, just for the record, a highly skilled, professional and qualified designer, who, as I said, specializes in Brandmark design and logo design. If you had also read my original post, I said that I had showed this design to multiple designers, who said that it was excellent, considering the amount of choice I was left to work with in the assignment, so to answer your question, yes, I did try.

And true, I must not be the man for the job. I mean anyone with an RSA Student Design award, The Graphic Design Award by Yamaha (GDAY) and several A*'s in A level Design and media clearly isn't skilled enough to create a simple, 3 colour based business logo.

Logo design being 'boring' is your opinion, and you're entitled to that. But saying that it doesn't allow you to be creative and be yourself is just stupid. It is one of the most creative types of Graphic Design out there, many others would also agree.

Let me teach you a little lesson aswell, don't dare post anything on anyone's design, stating that they know nothing about experience or creativity. That has got to be one of the most mindless and moronic things I have ever heard. God forbid anyone that has the 'pleasure' of coming across you in their career.

One more thing, anyone, and I mean anyone (and this goes for outside the bracket of Graphic Design) can give feedback and take feedback. You are obviously a very narrow minded idiot. Saying that I am a dead end is also untruthful, but I wont enlighten you with the mass range of logo's and designs I have created and have been used by big brands and names, because you obviously aren't at that level.

So to conclude that hideous attempt of a reply, thanks for enlightening me with your opinion , I be sure to try and gain the ability to 'give and take feedback' lol,

Have a very boring day:)


"The University gave me 60% of the stuff to work with" I Didnt read that in the description of your post,you said while being a couch potato that a commercial came up and give you an idea,not that you had an assessment for a class you're taking at University.

And Again "I have created and have been used by big brands and names, because you obviously aren't at that level." Why are you still "trying"(maybe its true) to one up chi,it was his feedback,and your being a little 6 year old when his drawing didnt go on the fridge.

Also Chi Is better known then you are,so if you were as big as you say you are,i think atleast someone will recognize you.

Honestly.
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I can appreciate the fact that you're trying to defend yourself, but God, you're awful at it.

Since I've only skimmed over what you've said (don't really care to read it all, you known ive already won this one) I'll touch on some things.

First I don't care you're experience with a pen tool, even if you have little with it (which is incredibly obvious).
I'm telling you what I think of the design overall.

Even if the "university" gave you the tools, and brief on what they want, dont act as if that restricts you in any way. It doesn't, what restricts you is your effortless thinking. Which only proves my many points.

I would love to know your friends name aswell, to see how truly remarkable you build him up to be. Then again I don't think I'd care, seeing as if he truly told you this was half decent, he's blowing smoke up your ass.

Though I don't so much believe you hold these titles, I'll take your word. Either way, just because you get a couple of A's, and a golden star, doesn't mean you are top notch. Which you're not.

As for the logo design part, like youve said it is my opinion in which I'm entitled to. I was defending myself, since, after all you were using it as a ground to share experience (somehow expecting to prove something).

When you talk about not saying anything about experience, you prove you're as hypocritical as you are flat out stupid. You brought that fire to your home, don't say shit about it. I'll talk about experience as I please with scum like you.

I will say again, you can't give feedback. You're hardly entitled to it anymore. You've emberassed yourself enough. There is a difference between giving feedback, and typing meaningless words. Which is all you've done, and can do by the looks of it.

I'll end it there. Have, "a boring day", as I'm sure you will.
Again, try not acting like you're some hot shit, because you're not.
You're a dead end.

Rekt x2
-Chi
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You should not try to identify yourself as an experienced or professional designer, there's always more you can work on and improve in, do not EVER take criticism for granted, especially from people who are far more experienced in the field than you are. If anything you should appreciate their efforts in giving honest opinions and do not feel offended by it. If you don't take criticism to consideration, that's on you.
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PREZA wrote We still on for dinner this sat? Say around 5pmish?...

Hold on, it depends, I gotta ask my brandmark buddy.
(See? I can come up with clever things, only, it doesn't take me 3 months.)
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I honestly thought this design looked good tbh whether that leaves me hate or not.. I dont design so i wouldnt know lol
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Fyredesigns wrote You should not try to identify yourself as an experienced or professional designer, there's always more you can work on and improve in, do not EVER take criticism for granted, especially from people who are far more experienced in the field than you are. If anything you should appreciate their efforts in giving honest opinions and do not feel offended by it. If you don't take criticism to consideration, that's on you.

Thats how I feel i've been doing design for so long but I don't categorize myself as a professional. I'm just experienced I have so much more that I need to know before I can be considered close to professional
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PREZA wrote OMG he got me so good. I really care what some freak on TTG says about my work lol.

I cba typing a full paragraph explaining why you're wrong, but by judging by your work I can tell you already are.

Have a good day:)


.. asks for feedback ..

.. gets feedback ..

.. doesn't like feedback ..

.. cries ..
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How does this represent a bank?
Please let me know.
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You should round join the corners, if you used illustrator.
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Also you should removed the company inc. it doesn't blend very well and just move the Odyssey up closer to the arrows. After doing that it will look a lot cleaner then it does in my opinion
P.S: don't ask for feedback if you can't take constructive criticism.
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PREZA wrote OMG he got me so good. I really care what some freak on TTG says about my work lol.

I cba typing a full paragraph explaining why you're wrong, but by judging by your work I can tell you already are.

Have a good day:)


I believe this "freak" has quite some knowledge in the design career.

"I really care what some freak on TTG says about my work lol."
By saying this, you are contradicting the whole reason you posted this, that is the reason for this forum, is to get feedback on work you have created. Just because he outlined your issues and problems leaves you in no position to frame him as a "freak" and portray him as being a bad designer and not knowing his stuff.

Rant over.

-FMWK
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