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Hey guys, I've been taking a break from graphics recently, focusing more on film and photography. However this is my first piece in a few months.

Thoughts? Criticism?

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I think it could possibly be a eSports team logo if anyone is interested, hmu!

Cheers xo

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wow that is amazing! Love the colours aswell
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Thanks for the kind words bud!

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You should keep the soft shadows out of it if you're going for this style.

I'd also change the stroke color.
Honestly, white might make it pop.
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Illustrated wrote You should keep the soft shadows out of it if you're going for this style.

I'd also change the stroke color.
Honestly, white might make it pop.


I was thinking the same thing with the shadows. I was thinking either get rid of them, or add them in other places where they make sense.
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Thanks for the feedback man, appreciate it.

However, I prefer the soft shadows, without them there isn't as much depth, it's a real flat image.

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I really like it dude keep it up!
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WlLL wrote Thanks for the feedback man, appreciate it.

However, I prefer the soft shadows, without them there isn't as much depth, it's a real flat image.


Well I mean you can have shading definitely. You should do hard shading though because soft shading on this style doesn't really work...
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Illustrated wrote
WlLL wrote Thanks for the feedback man, appreciate it.

However, I prefer the soft shadows, without them there isn't as much depth, it's a real flat image.


Well I mean you can have shading definitely. You should do hard shading though because soft shading on this style doesn't really work...


Very much agreed, harder shadows would look much more amazing. Also as Illustrated quoted about the stroke, definitely should change that as the blue does not fit in at all!
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