Just because he didn't give much detail doesn't mean you should leave blank space.

That's up to the artist to make the magic happen.

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I hope he didn't pay for this.
It looks very rushed, and amateur-ish to me.

The font seems like a bad choice.
It doesn't go with a mobster theme.
Plus the stroke on it looks bad, too.

The guys on the left are very low quality.
They're not even a solid color, I can see the disfigured color in the pixels. Not to mention they're blue-ish, not solid black.

You should try to keep the consistency.

Its a pretty nice banner just work on adding more effects and dont leave blank area's.
;) keep it up!

If you payed for that banner then im sorry to say but the designer you bought it from is a "fake"

meaning he rushes his work and just wants the money as quick as possible.

the font is awful the background doesnt suit the theme fair enough the connotative colour makes it sound dangerous but really doesnt suit the overall theme

Very rushed if i was to give a rating it would be 3/10 you can even see the whitebackground on the characters

spend time in your work if you want it too look the best.

sorry if i was to mean

Vladimer wrote

Illustrated wrote Just because he didn't give much detail doesn't mean you should leave blank space.

That's up to the artist to make the magic happen.

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I hope he didn't pay for this.
It looks very rushed, and amateur-ish to me.

The font seems like a bad choice.
It doesn't go with a mobster theme.
Plus the stroke on it looks bad, too.

The guys on the left are very low quality.
They're not even a solid color, I can see the disfigured color in the pixels. Not to mention they're blue-ish, not solid black.

You should try to keep the consistency.

Clearly you did not read the post at all. How does it not go with the Mobster theme?

The only thing i agree with you on is "Just because he didn't give much detail doesn't mean you should leave blank space.

That's up to the artist to make the magic happen."

Die.

you asked if it was a good start he told you and it does seem very rushed and just does not go with the mob theme try a different background like a mobster and like mob themed around the text and a better font hope I helped if you need an example just pm me

bdgr wrote If you payed for that banner then im sorry to say but the designer you bought it from is a "fake"

meaning he rushes his work and just wants the money as quick as possible.

the font is awful the background doesnt suit the theme fair enough the connotative colour makes it sound dangerous but really doesnt suit the overall theme

Very rushed if i was to give a rating it would be 3/10 you can even see the whitebackground on the characters

spend time in your work if you want it too look the best.

sorry if i was to mean

This is the type of criticism I need. Thanks for you`re feedback. And no I made this in a few minutes and was rushed.

Vladimer wrote

Illustrated wrote Just because he didn't give much detail doesn't mean you should leave blank space.

That's up to the artist to make the magic happen.

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I hope he didn't pay for this.
It looks very rushed, and amateur-ish to me.

The font seems like a bad choice.
It doesn't go with a mobster theme.
Plus the stroke on it looks bad, too.

The guys on the left are very low quality.
They're not even a solid color, I can see the disfigured color in the pixels. Not to mention they're blue-ish, not solid black.

You should try to keep the consistency.

Clearly you did not read the post at all. How does it not go with the Mobster theme?

The only thing i agree with you on is "Just because he didn't give much detail doesn't mean you should leave blank space.

That's up to the artist to make the magic happen."

Die.

Clearly I did read the whole post.
Although, if you could write in proper english, I'm sure it'd be a lot easier for everyone to understand what you're saying.

The text does not go with the mobster theme.
How does it, is the question?

It's silly letters. Mobsters are serious, smart, and bold.

Die? Because I gave you proper feedback?
Shows what kind of shitbag person you are.
If you can't take feedback, dont post.

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Vladimer wrote

bdgr wrote If you payed for that banner then im sorry to say but the designer you bought it from is a "fake"

meaning he rushes his work and just wants the money as quick as possible.

the font is awful the background doesnt suit the theme fair enough the connotative colour makes it sound dangerous but really doesnt suit the overall theme

Very rushed if i was to give a rating it would be 3/10 you can even see the whitebackground on the characters

spend time in your work if you want it too look the best.

sorry if i was to mean

This is the type of criticism I need. Thanks for you`re feedback. And no I made this in a few minutes and was rushed.

THAT'S the kind of feedback you need?
He basically said exactly what I said, except he said Sorry.
If "Sorry" for criticism is all you want, you wont get it from me.

It's better than most beginners but you did a poor job of cutting around the images leaving white outlines. It's hard to see the text and other than that it's pretty ok.

Even going with generic Godfather styled text would have made this better, if you ask for opinions at least respect those of experienced designers.