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Aspire Clothing | Website Design | Not Complete!
I thought i would bring this to thetechgame, as there are a lot of well known designers here, and i need some opinions of what i could add to make this look better, of course i need to add text, and sliders & Dividers, but i need to know what you think would go well on this. Home Page.
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I thought i would bring this to thetechgame, as there are a lot of well known designers here, and i need some opinions of what i could add to make this look better, of course i need to add text, and sliders & Dividers, but i need to know what you think would go well on this. Home Page.
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Now, is this going to be an actual website, or just for show?
I'm not really with the posting a wip thing, but I can see why you'd do it.
Anyway, from what little there is, I'll still try and give some feedback.
The top display is nice, the text could be a bit smaller.
There's not much space between the text on the left, you could add slits/borders between each.
Something like this:
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(mind the shadow, just to bring it out)
You could also just space them out from each other a bit more, that could work.
As for the display of the logo, the amount of space it's taking up is a bit large.
Kinda taking a chunk out of the whole thing really.
(I could get why seeing as it's a homepage however..)
Not a fan of the space-ey backdrop either, maybe blur it out a bit?
Makes it much more appealing to look at most of the time.
The logo itself is alright, the curvature is a bit odd to me though.
It would look much better without the line separation as well imo.
For display you could've just filled in the blank space with some lorem ipsum.
Other than that, I don't know what else to say, maybe just look a couple of [ Register or Signin to view external links. ] ?
Get some inspiration on how to build it up from this.
Hope it helps,
-Chi
I'm not really with the posting a wip thing, but I can see why you'd do it.
Anyway, from what little there is, I'll still try and give some feedback.
The top display is nice, the text could be a bit smaller.
There's not much space between the text on the left, you could add slits/borders between each.
Something like this:
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(mind the shadow, just to bring it out)
You could also just space them out from each other a bit more, that could work.
As for the display of the logo, the amount of space it's taking up is a bit large.
Kinda taking a chunk out of the whole thing really.
(I could get why seeing as it's a homepage however..)
Not a fan of the space-ey backdrop either, maybe blur it out a bit?
Makes it much more appealing to look at most of the time.
The logo itself is alright, the curvature is a bit odd to me though.
It would look much better without the line separation as well imo.
For display you could've just filled in the blank space with some lorem ipsum.
Other than that, I don't know what else to say, maybe just look a couple of [ Register or Signin to view external links. ] ?
Get some inspiration on how to build it up from this.
Hope it helps,
-Chi
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Chi wroteNow, is this going to be an actual website, or just for show?
I'm not really with the posting a wip thing, but I can see why you'd do it.
Anyway, from what little there is, I'll still try and give some feedback.
The top display is nice, the text could be a bit smaller.
There's not much space between the text on the left, you could add slits/borders between each.
Something like this:
[ Register or Signin to view external links. ]
(mind the shadow, just to bring it out)
You could also just space them out from each other a bit more, that could work.
As for the display of the logo, the amount of space it's taking up is a bit large.
Kinda taking a chunk out of the whole thing really.
(I could get why seeing as it's a homepage however..)
Not a fan of the space-ey backdrop either, maybe blur it out a bit?
Makes it much more appealing to look at most of the time.
The logo itself is alright, the curvature is a bit odd to me though.
It would look much better without the line separation as well imo.
For display you could've just filled in the blank space with some lorem ipsum.
Other than that, I don't know what else to say, maybe just look a couple of [ Register or Signin to view external links. ] ?
Get some inspiration on how to build it up from this.
Hope it helps,
-Chi
Thank you so much for your honest opinion, really does help, i can understand and you have definitely gave me some ideas, yes this will eventually be a website once all my designs are complete, thank you again, and wouldn't mind asking for your opinion a lot more.
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Not much there as of yet but as Chi said the nav is squashed together too much and I would change the font and bring the size down a little. The whole nav text should be vertically aligned.
The header image you currently have is boring and personally on that background I would have the logo in white.
Keep going with it, see where it goes.
The header image you currently have is boring and personally on that background I would have the logo in white.
Keep going with it, see where it goes.
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