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Thoughts?
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I like the colour choice. Those two shades of the blue/turquoise colour on the grey background look neat. However, here's a few things you should try to improve the design.

1) Increase height of the rectangles. The edge of the text meets the edge of the rectangle and it would look better if there was a gap. Make sure the text stays centered in the rectangle.

2) Set the alignment of the main paragraph and the five smaller text boxes (under the icons) to justified instead of left aligned.

3) Try changing the 'We Talk' , 'I Start' , ect titles to bold capitals?

4) Increase the gap between the main page title and sub title. ('Mafia designs' and 'Classy and clean')

5) Is the design meant to be like this? (see image below). In my opinion it would look better if it was moved up and aligned.

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Good attempt though. Keep at it!
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I would change the font in the rectangles.
Something more simple, narrow, and easier to read would be a lot better.

The header at the top isn't symmetrical, and its driving me crazy.
It actual reminds me of the marlboro packs, and cigarettes are disgusting, so I can't say I like that.

Overall very nice though,

The color scheme is nice.
And the icons look nice.
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Looks very nice, and clean forsure. I would personally make the text size a little bit smaller, because they almost look they are popping out of the box you have them in.
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