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So, I've been working my ass off trying to build an appealing, responsive and intuitive website for my personal brand. I'd really appreciate it if someone could take a look at it and offer some constructive criticism. There are somethings that I'm still working on changing and implementing, such as additional information in pertinence to the product's specific materials and product reviews.

Here's the link: axiosarts.com/product/stay-wild-long-sleeve

Thank you in advance and have a good one!

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Nothing I could really see that would need changing besides one thing.

prnt.sc/t75v3c

If you make the "Sign Up" text smaller and put it more in the middle that would look better imo.
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HELLAWAVE wroteNothing I could really see that would need changing besides one thing.

prnt.sc/t75v3c

If you make the "Sign Up" text smaller and put it more in the middle that would look better imo.


That's a consistency for all of those headers across the site, I've actually thought about removing the newsletter thing all-together and then work something into that area in place (perhaps product reviews).
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So, I know almost nothing about web design or owning a store.
I wrote this purely from a customer point of view, and is just my opinion.


1st note
This is a great message, agree with it completely. But how do you support the vets and first responders? If its from a morale stand point excellent! Nothing to add. If you donate profits or something I would advertise it here.

https://i.imgur.com/n0yvJ5o.png



2nd note
The sizes available do not match the size chart.


https://i.imgur.com/mIuid9w.png



3rd note
The same as Hellawave, but it does it for me with the shop text, not just sign in.

https://i.imgur.com/RBhvJqX.png



4th note
I would personally add payment options on the previous page. As I had to add to basket to discover the option to purchase via card was there, but not paypal etc...

https://i.imgur.com/2xSIAN7.png



5th note
Just my opinion, but I would personally expect to see 'Our Products' over the word 'Shop' in the menu. But it's not really an issue.

https://i.imgur.com/Z5ShrQ9.png


I hope you took this as constructive and not as a dig, it wasn't meant that way. Over all the site looks nice and the design you have on the current products is pretty cool.

Best of look with this!
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Au wrote
So, I know almost nothing about web design or owning a store.
I wrote this purely from a customer point of view, and is just my opinion.


1st note
This is a great message, agree with it completely. But how do you support the vets and first responders? If its from a morale stand point excellent! Nothing to add. If you donate profits or something I would advertise it here.

https://i.imgur.com/n0yvJ5o.png



2nd note
The sizes available do not match the size chart.


https://i.imgur.com/mIuid9w.png



3rd note
The same as Hellawave, but it does it for me with the shop text, not just sign in.

https://i.imgur.com/RBhvJqX.png



4th note
I would personally add payment options on the previous page. As I had to add to basket to discover the option to purchase via card was there, but not paypal etc...

https://i.imgur.com/2xSIAN7.png



5th note
Just my opinion, but I would personally expect to see 'Our Products' over the word 'Shop' in the menu. But it's not really an issue.

https://i.imgur.com/Z5ShrQ9.png


I hope you took this as constructive and not as a dig, it wasn't meant that way. Over all the site looks nice and the design you have on the current products is pretty cool.

Best of look with this!


Currently only looking for feedback on our actual product pages, the other portions of the site are still under development. Thank you for your feedback though, I'll certainly take those notes under consideration! Also, I've fixed the size guide not displaying the correct information, thanks for pointing that out for me.
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