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Hey there guys today I'll be showcasing my twitter header that I made for a Xbox NBA team that are ranked 1 EU. I really enjoyed making this, it took me like 1 hour+ to make. Made it yesterday it was fun learnt a few bits there and then. I would like feedback on my work.



What needs to be worked on?

Illuminati Eye on the right hand side of the header as it looks bright and doesn't look right.



Thanks to Zesri for making me the twitter revamp template for me as I don't know how to make it. Like with all of the like and RT symbols.

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I really like the overall design but I think the font could be changed. I just think it's a little too simple for the style/theme you're going for, apart from that the colours and layout look great.
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The font is iffy, doesn't really go with the banner/theme.

It kinda just looks like everything isnt blended and its just been thrown together.

Maybe a color correction or something can sort that out.

The idea is nice you could have made it better I think.
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XXIII wroteThe font is iffy, doesn't really go with the banner/theme.

It kinda just looks like everything isnt blended and its just been thrown together.

Maybe a color correction or something can sort that out.

The idea is nice you could have made it better I think.



There is CC with it. lol
As I said I need re-do the Illuminati eye on the right hand side, it'll look better.
What you mean I thrown the whole design everything, bitch whaa...
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dah wrote
XXIII wroteThe font is iffy, doesn't really go with the banner/theme.

It kinda just looks like everything isnt blended and its just been thrown together.

Maybe a color correction or something can sort that out.

The idea is nice you could have made it better I think.



There is CC with it. lol
As I said I need re-do the Illuminati eye on the right hand side, it'll look better.
What you mean I thrown the whole design everything, bitch whaa...
Id say it needs more contrast, and more time spent on the design.
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XXIII wrote
dah wrote
XXIII wroteThe font is iffy, doesn't really go with the banner/theme.

It kinda just looks like everything isnt blended and its just been thrown together.

Maybe a color correction or something can sort that out.

The idea is nice you could have made it better I think.



There is CC with it. lol
As I said I need re-do the Illuminati eye on the right hand side, it'll look better.
What you mean I thrown the whole design everything, bitch whaa...
Id say it needs more contrast, and more time spent on the design.



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Looks awesome dude, some seriously great work!
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Looks really professional man, might have to hit you up to help with my Twitch profile!
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Pretty good work you do homie.

Keep working hard at it.
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I really like the design and the overlays are merged really nicely! I would personally reduce the blur / glow on the icon

All in all good work!
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