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Hi. I would like to showcase my graphics business that has just started.

If you guys could give me your opinions and/or tips it would much appreciated. Thanks!

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Not saying i can do better but these are a little basic, mostly look like random text on images you found online.

Maybe try something a little more than that
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The logo you made yourself looks pretty cool!
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ItzSaxbyyy wrote Not saying i can do better but these are a little basic, mostly look like random text on images you found online.

Maybe try something a little more than that


Thanks for the feedback. Have only just started illustration, so going minimalist for now.
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I forgot to include my most favored piece lol.

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ItzSaxbyyy wrote Not saying i can do better but these are a little basic, mostly look like random text on images you found online.

Maybe try something a little more than that


Also they're not random text on images. Most are illustrations... I'm only a beginner. The only one I used images on is the MG logo. The rest are images provided by the clients themselves. And so are the fonts.
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I like this one, without all the 'white space' (that's not so white) around it [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]
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ApexJnr wrote I like this one, without all the 'white space' (that's not so white) around it [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]


Thanks buddy. That was 1 of my first pieces. Done last year, have only just started again, the white and grey was a failed gradient lol. I have improved since then!
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The colour was fine! Just the huge white space/blank area makes it look strange (to me, this is just an opinion!). I do like it though.
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ApexJnr wrote The colour was fine! Just the huge white space/blank area makes it look strange (to me, this is just an opinion!). I do like it though.


Thank you bro much appreciated! I think it was a problem with rendering or the gradient itself cant really remember. But I have improved since then, cant wait to see where the future takes me as im hella passionate for illustration!
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