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So I finished what I posted earlier and would like some feedback it's been a few years since I've designed and this is what I came up with.


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Looks sick bro!

Why'd you stop designing?
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This keeps impressing me man!

If I ever need someone to do Graphics I'll hit you up.
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That looks sick man keep it up!
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this is fireeeee
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Looks really nice! Keep it up man
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GustavAhr wrote Looks sick bro!

Why'd you stop designing?


Just kinda got interested in other things.
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He asked for feedback and half of you guys are simply saying it looks good. Which, it does. But in my opinion, id use a different texture for the text, but that's just me. I prefer a red and black type of template and not a bright neon one, but regardless it is well put together, and it's yours so you put your own touch on it that you like.
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I hate being horrible on here, every time I give advice it seems like I am but I'm honestly not so I'm sorry if you get offended before hand;

The style is very generic & old, you see similar designs on twitter everyday since 2010. Although the design is decent compared to others, it has a lot of room for improvement.

I don't know if you've used an effects on photoshop for the text or made it in C4D but I doesn't match each letter, I'd personally avoid adding affects like that unless you know how to blend it properly especially with that background.

If you stick with designing minimalistic things starting with fonts/text affects, backgrounds gradients and shapes. Once you feel competent and want to try harder and more complex designs, watch some tutorials on blending effects & how to properly do it.

Your designing isn't bad, keep practice. Try visiting my sticky, it's very helpful for beginners through to intermediate designers here;

Forums/t=7168027/beginneradvance-...rator.html

You can also try using the pen tool, although it's very hard you'll get used to it & it's incredible using it. Here's an awesome tutorial by illustrated;

Archives/t=7197911/ps-pen-tool-co...guide.html

I may not be a "Graphics King" however, I do know my way around the basics & further on both photoshop and illustrator. So if you have any questions feel free to PM me or any of the other awesome designers out there including:

Axios
illustrated
Zef (although I haven't seen much activity from him)

Keep designing, you'll only improve your knowledge!
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Looking good!

I would personally change the blue tubing to a darker blue to match the background and also possible add a black brush over the logo to darken it (mess with the opacity)

Good to see the work!
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