I like the beat alot, something to work on is it's sounds like your voice is x3 I would make it echo a little bit. Not too much, and maybe invest in a better mic or put a little bit of a auto tune to it to make it more deep. Other than that it's pretty solid good job keep up the hard work.

ImSoFarAway wrote I like the beat alot, something to work on is it's sounds like your voice is x3 I would make it echo a little bit. Not too much, and maybe invest in a better mic or put a little bit of a auto tine to it to make it more deep. Other than that it's pretty solid good job keep up the hard work.

Thanks for the feedback, I definitely plan on buying a proper mic soon.

It wasn't bad at all dude. Keep up the hard work and you'll make it somewhere.

One thing to note is your microphone, I would look into getting a studio quality mic.

Pretty good tune you got here mate, and i loved the beat, but as KyloCrux said, maybe invest in a mic, would make it a whole lot better. If your on a buget this mic would be great for you and its the one i just recently bought and works great, only down side for me is i have to yhave the mic very close to my mouth, but in your case this shouldnt be a problem. [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]

Mikey wrote Pretty good tune you got here mate, and i loved the beat, but as KyloCrux said, maybe invest in a mic, would make it a whole lot better. If your on a buget this mic would be great for you and its the one i just recently bought and works great, only down side for me is i have to yhave the mic very close to my mouth, but in your case this shouldnt be a problem. [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]

Thanks for the feedback & mic recommendation.

KyloCrux wrote It wasn't bad at all dude. Keep up the hard work and you'll make it somewhere.

One thing to note is your microphone, I would look into getting a studio quality mic.

Thanks for the feedback, I definitely plan on buying a better mic.

From artist to artist imma keep it with you
besides quality I'd say work on your delivery meaning the clarity of your words, slang and tone; the vibe you have works but this is where you'll need the quality improved the most to really get people to come back and actually enjoy your music, next would be to work on your flow and try to have less pauses in the middle of a verse or a hook(Just my opinion but I think of it as half-assed song when I hear unnecessary pauses) but keep it up it wasn't a bad song but it could be better with mixing &mastering settings I'd rate it 5/10.

I hope my advice can help you improve

-iamRocco