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I'm getting a tattoo but I really don't know how to reword this lyric to sound good.

"And do you know that every day's the first of the rest of your life,"-angles on the moon-
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pollynot wroteI'm getting a tattoo but I really don't know how to reword this lyric to sound good.

"And do you know that every day's the first of the rest of your life,"-angles on the moon-


Try this maybe? "And do you know that every day's the first and last day of the rest of your life"
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MyNameIsVest wrote
pollynot wroteI'm getting a tattoo but I really don't know how to reword this lyric to sound good.

"And do you know that every day's the first of the rest of your life,"-angles on the moon-


Try this maybe? "And do you know that every day's the first and last day of the rest of your life"


Oh i like this!
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pollynot wroteI'm getting a tattoo but I really don't know how to reword this lyric to sound good.

"And do you know that every day's the first of the rest of your life,"-angles on the moon-


Try this maybe? "And do you know that every day's the first and last day of the rest of your life"
and 'and---don't got to be in it
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pollynot wrote
MyNameIsVest wrote
pollynot wroteI'm getting a tattoo but I really don't know how to reword this lyric to sound good.

"And do you know that every day's the first of the rest of your life,"-angles on the moon-


Try this maybe? "And do you know that every day's the first and last day of the rest of your life"
and 'and---don't got to be in it

Take out the word "and" then but truthfully what i reworded it to is what truly happens when you wake up, thats the first and technically the last day of your life because you will never get that time back no matter what.
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'Treat everyday as your first & last'

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Just to stir things up here, if today is the first day of the rest of your life, what is tomorrow? What was yesterday?
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