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This is my first time ever attempting something like this, so please give some feedback on how to improve in the future. Also, let me know what you like about it!

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This doesn't look too bad man. 8/10

Better than anything I could do

You can only get better
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Less face shadow IMO, Other than that all you really need to work on is smaller details. The neck for one looks out of place, and the ears.

For a first at doing this, there really is not a whole lot to cover, well done.
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Mitochondria wrote Less face shadow IMO, Other than that all you really need to work on is smaller details. The neck for one looks out of place, and the ears.

For a first at doing this, there really is not a whole lot to cover, well done.


At first, I didn't use as much shadow, by doing that it made the image too flat. Also, I was tracing of a picture of me so I don't know how the ears and neck are out of place lol. I will spend more time and the ears and neck next time I try this.

Thanks for the feedback!
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Would've defined the lips a little more
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Visxal wrote Update:

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Update looks clearly better than the original.

Good stuff.
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That character looks rough
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