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Hey guys thanks for stopping in, I just finished my first attempt at a video introduction, please check it out and I leave feedback!

The video it is for will be up at 10 tonight. If you guys are curious to check it out lmk, and I will get you a link. (((:


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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BivSg2V5D2c

there is a link to my last video, because for some reason i cannot get a channel link so there ya go, see you at 10.
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I'd center the text on the screen and stick with one font for all the text involved. Also adding some fx to make it lightly glow would be nice.
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Speakest wroteI'd center the text on the screen and stick with one font for all the text involved. Also adding some fx to make it lightly glow would be nice.


thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it (:
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I would go with a different font, maybe something bolder with smaller text for the subtitle. Perhaps even have the text where it appears interactive with the setting, have it appear as though it's slightly behind one of the objects the camera is panning into. Other than that, it's a great first attempt - keep it up!
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Axios wroteI would go with a different font, maybe something bolder with smaller text for the subtitle. Perhaps even have the text where it appears interactive with the setting, have it appear as though it's slightly behind one of the objects the camera is panning into. Other than that, it's a great first attempt - keep it up!


that's something that I forgot about, I completely forgot that to make it look pretty good I should put some text behind an object, I am using sony vegas 14 hopefully ill be able to find a simple tutorial for that trick.

Thanks (:
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The beginning was really dark and hard to see. Also, I'd add color correction.
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I think you should change the text to something a little bolder that stands out more, you could also make it a little bigger.
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The "Presents" font looks boring as everyone uses that font on their graphics work. I would add some SFX, I think you could improve this a tad more but as it's your first attempt it's too to bad man. Keep it up.
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Not bad for your first attempt man, it looks good.
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