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I might post the tutorial that I made for this.
Depends on how it turns out.
Enjoy.


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Looks clean man Nice work, i don't know how i feel about the full stop after the name
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I've seen some of your work and this one wasn't one of your best. The mixing of the photos was really messing and the purple atmosphere kind of just ruined it for me. The period was odd too because it's rare to see a banner to have one after the name but that's just me.

I'm also confused on why you selected an army type banner for it, really didn't make sense and took away the feeling of it.

Sorry for the harshness but its just what I thought. Sorry not sorry.
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I agree, not to mention the very last color I think of for a military theme is pink.
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On a personal level, I love the theme of this because of the vibe, and the emotions it gives off, that is the beauty of art, hence graphic design.

On a deeper/professional level, it basically looks like a picture overlay-ed on a picture that was overlay-ed on a picture. Don't get me wrong, there is nothing wrong with doing this, the problem in your design is it doesn't look like you put your own style in it, its bland, there isn't blending, the color from all of the overlays gives a bad second look. Also, the text seems thrown on top with a basic font, put a little more style in it and you will be just fine.

All in all, everything has its flaws, there are positives in this design as well as negatives, all you can do is learn from your mistakes and keep practicing and perfect your practices.

I hope you don't take this the wrong way at all!!!!! Keep on moving!
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Tom wrote I've seen some of your work and this one wasn't one of your best. The mixing of the photos was really messing and the purple atmosphere kind of just ruined it for me. The period was odd too because it's rare to see a banner to have one after the name but that's just me.

I'm also confused on why you selected an army type banner for it, really didn't make sense and took away the feeling of it.

Sorry for the harshness but its just what I thought. Sorry not sorry.


No problem.
I wasn't the biggest fan of this one either.
Also, I'm glad you actually gave your opinion. Thank you.
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Took some of the feedback I got and edited the banner some more.
I'm happier with this one, but let me know what you think.
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The purple gone and the flag gone looks so much better. Where the tree-line merges with the soldier's look's way cleaner and not as sloppy and the new Font looks alot better also. Not going to say 10/10 cause maybe some of the other's will spot something or other that can be cleaned up but great cleanup.

Good work
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The new version looks alot better, good work
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Both are pretty boring to me, not something I would use. Newer one's text is just dull and I'm not a fan of the black on the bottom half.

4/10 if I had to rate both.
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